Fic: Taken 10/10 Life on Mars, Gene/Sam, Adult

[amproof]

Fic: Taken 10/10
Author: amproofRating: Brown Cortina (consensual sex, psychological torture

Comments

[lady_t_220]

Quick typo note-- a diet of boos and bacon

I have no idea what boos are. You mean 'booze', by any chance? *g*

[amproof]

thank you! I knew there was something wrong, but I couldn't think of it! LOL

[dorsetgirl]

This is a great story - I've really enjoyed reading it all and I was so pleased to see the ending come up this morning.

I'm in a hurry at the moment, but I'll read this chapter again later and hopefully the whole thing. I like the way you've handled Sam's confusion and the coma issues, and the little things like having Vic sitting on the ceiling to indicate Sam's state of mind.

Both Gene and Sam are wonderful all the way through, both so true to themselves, and I love the way Gene looks after Sam at the end. Thank you for a great read!

[amproof]

Thank you so much for reading it and sticking with it all the way through. It was great having people encouraging me to write. :) I'm happy that you liked it. I've appreciated all the encouragement. :)

[jean_geanie]

Brilliant, I mean horrible what you put the boys through but just so well written and impossible to stop reading.

The insane!morgan was creepy and I'm hoping there's going to be severe repercussions for everyone who kept them prisoner.

But you gave the boys (and the missus ^-^) their happy ending :)

Loved it!

[amproof]

Writing Morgan was fun! And to think, I had not initially planned to use him at all... LOL

Thank you very much for all the kind words and encouragement. I had fun writing this and sharing it with you. :)

[dragonlit]

Wow! Marvelous ending, still really leaving things up in the air as to what was real and what wasn't but that's the delightful part of this world. You certainly did put our dear Sam through the wringer and Gene too for that matter, with his sacrifice for Sam. This was a great read! Thank you.

[amproof]

Thank you so much. I really appreciate the comments and I'm glad you liked the story so well. It was a lot of fun to write. :)

[mikes_grrl]

Whoa! Twisty wrap up! I like the ambiguity of what might be real, might not -- leave it all in Sam's head, that's what I say! LOL!

But full of adventure and intrigue and I liked Gene in this, taking every chance, even for a crazy git like Sam. <3

Thanks for this! It was a great read!

[amproof]

Thank you so much. I'm thrilled that you read this since you know how I devour your stuff LOL, and it's a great bonus that you liked it as much as you did. :) I had fun reading your comments last night. That twisty end was all b/c I didn't think it was practical to throw them in bed together at Gene's house after all that had happened. They needed something else...like Morgan! LOL And I just had to bring the Mrs. Genie back! Thanks again, I'm delighted you enjoyed it.