More Alice fic that I hadn't planned on writing at all....

Jan 07, 2010 20:17

TITLE: Moving Fast
AUTHOR: amphetamine_47
RATING: PG-13
SPOILERS: Parts 1 & 2
DISCLAIMER: Not mine, only playing with them! *pets*
AUTHORS NOTES: Alice has issues, and those don't magically go away. But she's gotta deal with them if she and Hatter are going to learn to live happily ever after ( Read more... )

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amphetamine_47 January 8 2010, 04:07:08 UTC
Yay, thank you! :)

Luckily, Hatter's a hard man to say no to!

And I have to say that I only lurk in Primeval fandom, but I've loved your stuff at Primeval100!

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sweetone41185 January 8 2010, 03:57:13 UTC
I really liked it. It had just the right amount of angst and happy, very sweet and very real. I am also glad you listened to Hatter. Course I imagine he quite difficult to ignore. : D

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amphetamine_47 January 8 2010, 04:08:06 UTC
Thanks, I was definitely going for real. Our girl Alice definitely has some things to work out!

And yeah, that Hatter will not be denied! :P

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goodtimenation January 8 2010, 04:25:15 UTC
She has so much baggage, and Hatter has so much patience for it all, even though he has baggage, too (at least in my opinion). Love it.

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amphetamine_47 January 8 2010, 12:30:48 UTC
Oh yeah, they're definitely a heavily-laden couple; there may actually be a companion piece to this, because adding his in here just made it go crazy! :)

Thanks--and I laugh every time I see your icon :)

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goodtimenation January 8 2010, 12:45:32 UTC
I would very much like to read a companion piece if you end up writing it, because Hatter's backstory and emotional baggage intrigues me in a sick, sick way.

And thank you. XD

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amphetamine_47 January 8 2010, 14:07:27 UTC
Oh me too! There's a lot going on in these two's brains, and I enjoy exploring their dysfunctions ;)

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thewritingbug January 8 2010, 15:39:10 UTC
*ahem* I'm in love with this story, thankyewvurrehmuch. Alice has lots of issues, and while it's nice to put them aside a bit in favour of fluff or smut, I like stories where people actually remember. Alice's characterization is completely perfect. Much love. Pardon me while I go off and squee-flail for a little bit.

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amphetamine_47 January 8 2010, 16:14:35 UTC
Yays! Thanks so much! I love fluffy smut as much as the next gal, but I figure some things need to happen in between, right? :) LOL

AND, just realized I never commented on YOUR fic (which I meant to, but I read it at work, and then forgot because I SUCK) "Bedtime", which was ALSO a fantastic work-through of Alice's issues, with a side of fluff & sweetness. I'm so the girl who can't sleep with people, too :D

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thewritingbug January 8 2010, 22:38:40 UTC
Eeb! *blushes* Thank you! Alice and Hatter together could be an exciting little buffet of dysfunctionalities and issues that need to be worked through. I think that's part of what makes me like them so much--they're both very REAL. They have issues and hangups just like all of us do.

Like not wanting to sleep with people.

And setting things on fire. (I once made my dishwasher smoke. THE DISHWASHER. HOW??)

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amphetamine_47 January 8 2010, 22:43:07 UTC
YES. They are, exactly, and I think that's why I've been furiously writing them since the show aired. They're not perfect! They seem to work well together because of--or perhaps in SPITE of those dysfunctions, and it's wonderful prying inside to see what makes them tick!

OMG, I totally based Hatter's incident off of my own life--I set the washing machine on fire. FULL OF WATER, it was on fire! I am SO right there with you!

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akuni January 8 2010, 16:07:04 UTC
This is sweet, a nice look at Alice on her continuing journey to overcome some issues. Love the domestic descriptions, too!

+mem

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amphetamine_47 January 8 2010, 16:15:43 UTC
Thanks so much, glad you liked it! :D

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