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amorphous

5 drabbles: Fruits Basket

Mar 01, 2008 08:57

Title: Broken Mother
Words: 100
Challenge: #71 - broken ( table)
Rating: PG13
Characters/Pairings: Shigure/Ren, Shigure/Akito
Warnings: Major spoilers! SLIGHT spoiler of Chapter 101
Author's Notes: Comments are more than welcome!

( Broken Mother )

#fanfic: fruits basket, !fanfic, fanfic: drabble: fruits basket

Comments 1

styromgalleries March 1 2008, 16:50:35 UTC

Wow! That short Kyo/Tohru piece is lovely!! I think it's exactly how Kyo must have felt until the end.

He couldn't be with her the way she deserved, the way he wanted to.
Her light deserved a place to shine, and she couldn't shine as bright in his darkness.
These two lines are my favorites, especially the last. They are sad and beautiful at the same time. Great job!!