Eyes Like Honey - A Sakurai Sho Fanfic (18/?)

Oct 16, 2019 03:00

Pairing: Sakurai Sho x Fictional Female (Reader) *see note below
Rating: R for whole series, PG-13 for Ch.18
Genre: Romance, Drama
Word count: 7,075

Plot: A 33-year-old singleton, Nijishima Kokoro, finds herself at a host club where she meets the club's most popular host, Sakurai Sho. The encounter propels Kokoro to explore a different kind of ( Read more... )

sho, writings: fanfic, eyeslikehoney

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tobefree0714 October 17 2019, 15:23:01 UTC
SIGH!!

Where do I even begin. I've read it. I've reread it. What a rollercoaster.

You know I think a lot of what strikes a chord with me where these two characters are concerned is that I experienced a similar relationship. Not one quite so shrouded in mystery, but one that ended abruptly with no explanations after being a whirlwind of bliss. I understand that heartache and confusion. It speaks to your talent as a writer that as I read I found myself getting more and more angry with Sho. I think there is nothing so unattractive as a man showing cowardice.

However, I also know the lengths a man will go to for someone he truly loves. Even at the cost of his own happiness and well-being. So while I want to wring his neck. I know the sacrifice he made is a deep one.

You've got me on pins and needles!!! Sincerely, thank you for continuing their story!!

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amnosxmatsujun October 24 2019, 09:17:59 UTC
Thank you for reading (and rereading), dearie! ♡ I know I threw my readers in for a loop with this chapter...

I’m sorry to hear that you had that kind of experience. It must have caused so much confusion with lots of unanswered questions, maybe even making you feel lost or wrongfully undesirable. Kokoro definitely has unanswered questions and she’s struggling with being okay not fully understanding the whys and what ifs. It’s hard.

Ch.19 is ready for you! ;) I can see you struggling to love Sho despite the anger. I wonder what you’ll think after you read the next chapter...!

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farrasya October 18 2019, 03:16:17 UTC
Oh my GOSH!

Never expected that you will post another chapter this soon... Thank you so much.
It kinda made my day, after the long-struggling with uni assignments.

Some of my speculations were right on the spot, but the second part of the chapter brought me to the edge and the ending was another cliffhanger. As long as I read I am really rooting for Kokoro... Kokoro you are strong enough to get through this, ganbatte ne!

I'll be patiently waiting for the brand new chapters... Thank you for all the hard work. :)

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amnosxmatsujun October 24 2019, 09:22:00 UTC
Thanks for reading!! ♡ I’m challenging myself to release one chapter a week for the month of October. So far, I’ve been keeping my promise :)

I’m rooting for Kokoro, too! Although there are tons of unanswered questions, I hope that you’ll understand more and more as she sorta through her feelings. I threw my readers in for a loop with this chapter... it’s intense and it kept me up when I was writing it.

Ch.19 is ready to read! How does this cliffhanger resolve?

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stormfordream October 18 2019, 14:59:24 UTC
So fast! All this in one chapter?! Woah there. And come oooon, that cliffhanger!

This sure left me hanging. Can't wait to see the next one!!! (REALLY CAN'T WAIT ASKJDASUDASKDJNASD)

Anyway, thanks for posting this soon!

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amnosxmatsujun October 24 2019, 09:29:23 UTC
Thanks for reading! :D I know, I know. I threw my readers in for a loop with this chapter... so much happens in it. It kept me up while I was writing it.

Ch.19 is ready to read! How will this cliffhanger resolve...?

P.S. Thanks for finding me over there, too! ^^ I’m still going to release here first, then update there a day or two later!

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teri12576 October 20 2019, 17:11:20 UTC
YEEES! This came faster than I expected. :3 You indeed did awesome job with creating a warm atmosphere. However the more horrible was the slap we got from their "break up". XD Seriously I got stabbed in the heart while reading this and I have to admit I like/hate how you play with readers emotions hehe. The last sentence. I am praying it is not the person I think it is... caaant wait to read more :D

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amnosxmatsujun October 24 2019, 09:33:07 UTC
Thanks for reading, dear! ♡ I’m challenging myself to one chapter a week for the month of October, and so far, I’ve kept my word. :)

I know... I threw my readers in for a loop with this chapter. It was a tough one but this part of the story is something I’ve been wanting to write since I started this series. I hope you’re enjoying it despite the emotional roller coaster you’re on. ^^;

Ch.19 is ready for you! How will this cliffhanger resolve? I wonder if your guess was right...

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