Eyes Like Honey - A Sakurai Sho Fanfic (11/?)

Oct 20, 2016 18:09

Pairing: Sakurai Sho x Fictional Female (Reader) *see note below
Rating: R for whole series, PG-13 for Ch.11
Genre: Romance, Drama
Word count: 6,384

Plot: A 33-year-old singleton, Nijishima Kokoro, finds herself at a host club where she meets the club's most popular host, Sakurai Sho. The encounter propels Kokoro to explore a different kind of ( Read more... )

sho, writings: fanfic, eyeslikehoney

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brenda000 October 20 2016, 09:59:41 UTC
Reading this makes my own heart race. Again, how can anyone be so perfect? It's just so unbelievable.
Kokoro's really being treated as a lady and someone who is loved.
He's just so good at taking care of her and he knows exactly what to say, what to do. It's amazing.
I'd say I see some similarities between myself and Kokoro. I quite understand how it is like being a bro to guys. My guy friends see me as one of them too. Plus, I get uncomfortable in, well, girly clothes.
This date feels so grown up yet comfortable, with touches of fanciness poking now and then. Must be fun.

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amnosxmatsujun December 6 2016, 01:07:23 UTC
Thanks for continuing to read my fanfic! :D

That's what I love about Sho-san, too, that he is always a step ahead of her, helping her feel more secure and comfortable in her own skin. <3 I love how you described the date, because that's what I was hoping for! I'm also glad to hear you can relate to Kokoro when it comes to girly clothes, hehe.

Ch.12 is ready to read now. Sorry for the long wait, thanks for your patience!

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aistorm3104 October 20 2016, 12:20:38 UTC

This was such a great chapter!! I love how they are, I love how sho treats her! Kokoro is written to be such a lucky woman, I wanna be her!!
You've written sho so perfectly, flawless!!
Thank you for this yet another wonderful chapter :D

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amnosxmatsujun December 6 2016, 01:10:08 UTC
Thanks for waiting patiently! <3 I want to be Kokoro, too ;__; Can you imagine being treated like that by Sho-san?! *dies*

Ch.12 is ready now! Spot the cameo ;)

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lady_ryora October 20 2016, 12:58:29 UTC
Nice chapter! Love it so much...

Well, I can relate with this part, being a girl whose friends are more on boys. Yeah, makes me more boyish. And till now, at the age of 25, didn't know how to do most of girly things like or say not used to do like make-up (even I need to) and even my posture is affected. hahhahahaha.

Hope I can find someone too, who can love my boyish side... hahahahahha

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amnosxmatsujun December 6 2016, 06:21:05 UTC
Thanks for stopping by to read my fanfic! :)

That's okay! I don't really believe in changing yourself in hopes that someone might love you. Healthy relationships are with those who love you because you're you!

Ch.12 is up if you're interested in the continuation of this date ;)

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haku_nineno October 20 2016, 15:11:46 UTC
I'm baaack! (well, not with the 30 min spare this time lol xD) and i'm soooo looking forward to the morning after and then ....

THE MORNING SCENE IS KILLING MEEEEE!!! i can picture it perfectly how the honeyed atmosphere is. the way he smirks (this is a must for every chapter lol), the way he laugh at kokoro, the small kiss he planted on her collarbone, the way he prepared toast for her, all the small things he done to her make me feel uuuuuhhh ;__; AND CAN WE TALK ABOUT THE KISS BEFORE THEY PARTED?? It's so short yet so sweet i can't even stop grinning, my heart thumping like crazy on that. as a fluff girl i'd like to say you successfully made my stomach filled with butterflies here and there <3 ( ... )

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amnosxmatsujun December 6 2016, 06:30:49 UTC
Thanks for continuing to read, dearie! Your comments always make me smile (and giggle)! <3 It's great to hear feedback for your writing. :) What you said about growing fonder about Sho-san made me so happy~!

YES YES smirking is a must,. In fact, it really isn't Sho-san without the smirking x3 Ah, so you like fluff, eh? Duly noted... *smirks*

I want a Sho-san as a boyfriend, too T_T And have him make me toast and try his best to be a great host at his house... <3 Is that really a secret wish? I didn't know that, but now I do. ;)

Ch.12 is up now if you're interested in finding out what happens the rest of the date. Thanks for waiting patiently!!

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kuronokeiko October 20 2016, 15:38:07 UTC

I'm wondering how they date will end..
I hope with a very sexy way..

A different side of Sho here.. he's so cheerfull..

Looking forward for the next..

Can't wait.. I swear..

😁😁😁😁

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amnosxmatsujun December 6 2016, 06:31:49 UTC
Thanks for stopping by to read my fanfic! :D

Looks like you've already read Ch.12, hehe. Let's see where the night takes them, shall we...? ;)

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