i'm touched with desire, what don't i do?;

[inuyashacooks]

jeezis. here are 13 poems where there should be none. and by "should be none" i mean that there should be fic here instead of poetry. anyway, by subject they're just varied, and by title they are: Winning in Life, Fast Cars and Dark Night, To Live in Yr Hands, The World Underwater, On The Kingdom, Key, Sinning in the City, The Road, Untitled and

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[tupelo_thief]

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you see that faec? awesome. B|. youre so damn good at poetry man 8D

my favorite was winning in life and my second favorite was the last. that was rly fuckin ossim. i friggin loved the first stanza of sinning in the city and the last stanza of a matter of time. and these 2 things: to clear your charcoal dreams, to throw your pearls and tears. & blind hurricane. and tho i wouldnt go so far as untitled and offensive (which is a boss title XD) theres quite a bit of truth there. an key made me think of what youve said about your sister. im sorry if that was all wrong or whatever, its just what i thought

you had another poetry post, right? bc i recognized the road cept i cant find the post it was in =/.

[inuyashacooks]

yeah key was about that XDDD and yeah id just say that its just me being me because the catholic church repulses me and protestantism is depressingly lame. like i dont care to openly criticize another religion, like islam, or hinduism, or what have you, but since i profess myself a christian as well i think that its important that these things be open for scrutiny. its like leonard cohen sez about america in that poem- "i love the country but i cant stand the scene." i like the fact that people are faithful, but i dont like their churches. i dont mean to offend peoples faith but i do mean to offend their religion. i did notice that i posted this on easter tho, hahaha way to be inappropriate.

the road i sent t you beforehand but dint post here, so thats why y recognized it :D but thankyou!!!!!!!!!!!! IM GLAD YOU LIKED EM HOMEZ.

[tupelo_thief]

i think that its important that these things be open for scrutiny. indeed, dont just blindly accept anything. LOLOLOL i didnt even notice, but u wud XD

ohhhhhhhhh it was an email. i seez B|