5 AM, cold sweats, waking up to the sky;

[inuyashacooks]

title: The Palace of Dreams (1/3)
pairing(s)/character(s): Japan, Greece, China, Korea; Greece/Japan and slight China/Korea
rating: i actually think it's pretty tame, but i'll say PG-13 just in case.
summary: By several strange twists of fate, Kiku Honda becomes one of the proprietors of a Kabukicho host club, with Heracles Karpusi as his number

Comments

[tupelo_thief]

comment fail, sorry.

if this is tld;dr than its ur own fault for bein so boss.

shall I assist him? -- I shall call the police!

It wasn’t out of kindness that he did it as out of a desire to see things in their right place --- PERFECT japan yo B|.

then he kicked himself for having treated him like he was a homeless person or something - LOL! …. I think my brain might just be turning that into a fic. STOP IT RIGHT NOW, YOU’VE BEEN FRIED ENOUGH ALREADY!

I think there’s more Turkish people in Japan than Greek,” he said, as though the fact perplexed and troubled him deeply. -- i love it XD and if i lived someplace with people who were like turkey - oh wait, I live in queens, so never mind

“You too...we’ll see each other if we see each other,” -- B|. dude. I fucking LOVE that.

“Yup. I think so. I like sleeping, too. And reading. And fucking.” -- ILU MAN XD

almost like summer with its shaking nightlight fevers -- B|

As he sat there, Kiku began to understand the feeling of parents who are disappointed in their children for wanting

i shall call the police!

[inuyashacooks]

kdjhfe rf haiuewh dwhef iqh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

*has nothing else to say except 8DDDDDD*

well, mebbe i do have somethin t say. ahahahahahahaha china is a money-loving slave driver XD thats what makes him so absolutely heart-warming.

surprisingly there arent that many host club fics :\ theres of course the whole empire series but nuthin besides that. you SHOULD write something with clothes.

i have no greece or japan icons either D: the only one i have of greece is him with turkey XD it sort of makes me sad but not really.

*goes to read your part two comment*

Re: i shall call the police!

[tupelo_thief]

8DDDDD

the empire series is only like 3 or 4 fics tho, right? this lack of host club fics makes me sad. and yet i dont feel like writing any to amend the situation XD. maybe i dont wanna write any bc the idea of a host club is so freakin WEIRD and foreign to me, i couldnt get the feel of it to write a good fic.

lolololol as much as i LOOOOOVE greeec/japan turkey/greece is way more epic XD

[heartshaker]

lol, i think i enjoyed reading this comment as much as i enjoyed the fic itself :B

queens. as in queens, ny? o.o

[chromatic_coma]

my god. i would just keep going on to part II, but I have to express how completely and totally brilliant this is. BRILLIANT!

You have an amazing grasp on the characters, this plot is so well fabricated, and all your descriptions and adjectives and those tiny little details make me swoon. I am irrevocably in love with this fic.

One of the most valuable assests Heracles had was his intelligence; knowledge is one of the most useful weapons. Through observation, you can learn what a person wants- you can learn what they’re asking you from their eyes

THAT IS THE MOST PERFECT QUOTE EVER. You understand these characters so well. Amazing. Brilliant. Incredible. I need more adjectives.

[inuyashacooks]

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD omg, thank you so much! :DDDDDDDDDDDD i would keep putting more d's on the end of that emoticon to express how i feel, but it would be kind of silly and repetitive lookin.

thank you again :D im really glad you like it and i appreciate your comment!!! :D

[chromatic_coma]

XDDDDDDDDDDDD it would be, but it's still cute <3

you're welcome, of course~

/flails around

[disownmereturns]

FFFFF /hyperventilates It's you~! ♥ I don't mind at all! :'D Aaaah~! /insanely giddy

I shall read this when I come back from class! /is late LOL

But oooooh~ THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU ;3;

Re: /flails around

[inuyashacooks]

:DDDDDDDDD yes! tis i!

take your time :D itll be here forever XD

NO PROBLEM, I HAVE TO THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME PROMPT!!!

back~

[disownmereturns]

;A;

/worships your wordplay

♥

[kaiya_tan]

Woah......*stumbles back and shakes head* Dude.....

.....Did I.....did I just enter the mind of Kiku? Because......well, damn cuz you sure as hell write it that way! I LOVE IT.

I'm absolutely crazy over your Heracules~ <33333 He's so.....so.....HIM and AWESOME and and andandand *squuueeeeaaalll* I would pay tons to get a host like Heracules X3

I wouldn't mind playing with Yong Soo though! Hessocute! >.< <333 I mean seriously, you're writing style confuses me a bit sometimes (but don't pay any mind to that, I get confused easily XD) but it's so, damn. It's deep and you definitely know how to use your words to get the FEELING dammit! For some reason, I loved the way you described the days and seasons best, it really gave me a concrete feel of the time the story is in. And that's just awesome X3 *feels like Prussia for using 'awesome' so much*

But seriously, it's brilliant and I'm straight off to read some more <3

[inuyashacooks]

:DDDDDD my gosh thank you! ahaha I do realize my writing style is sorta confusing, so I'm trying to rectify that XD

ahaha Yong Soo is probably my favorite :D he's so ridiculous and fun to write XDDD oh and thank you for the compliment about Kiku- this story in some ways turned out to be more about his mind than anything, so I'm glad that came across.

all in all thank you so much for your awesome feedback! /prussia/ I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

[midori_lover]

jdkljl;kdl;kf /flails around

this is just so so brilliant! I really really love your writing style. You describe everything so beautifully lfklkflfk. And everyone's so in character here. I especially love Yong Soo. He's just so adorable. XDDDD And lklgklkglgk the way you describe Heracles, so sexy~ XD.

/skips over to part II

[inuyashacooks]

:DDD ahsxfhvjs thank you!!! I'm glad you like it!

Yong Soo is prolly my favorite as well. he's just...so much fun XD

thank you so much again :'D /goes to read your part 2 comment