Comments | ammazzacaffe: been workin on my game cause life is taxin;

inuyashacooks in ammazzacaffe

been workin on my game cause life is taxin;

Jan 04, 2010 21:44

title: Canned Pineapples, Evil Shoelaces, and Other Ways You Mess Me Up
pairing: Germany/Italy
rating: PG
summary: Germany spends an entire unproductive day worrying over Italy.

( The reason I tripped is because my shoelaces are- uhm- I don't know, I think they have a mind of their own! And they came untied. They must be evil. )

*gift, ♦character: germany, ♦character: italy, ☆fanfic, !fandom: axis powers hetalia, ♠oneshot, ♥pairing: germany/italy

Comments 23

indigo_ire January 5 2010, 03:59:17 UTC

Eeeee, so cute, especially the "You drive me crazy" line! ^__^

<3

inuyashacooks January 5 2010, 04:06:54 UTC

haha, thank you! :D

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inuyashacooks January 5 2010, 04:07:24 UTC

XD adorable failure. he's fabulous.

haylerzz January 5 2010, 05:09:43 UTC

So cute! I love how you write Germany.

...and as an Italy cosplayer who's obsessed with pineapples, I couldn't stop laughing!

inuyashacooks January 5 2010, 05:36:24 UTC

thank you! :D glad you liked!

hahahahaha, pineapples are almost the perfect fruit for him- ridiculous and cute XD

princesssarahem January 5 2010, 07:52:30 UTC

I usually don't read fics here on this community cause they are usually pretty insane but this was really sweet. Great job with it.

inuyashacooks January 5 2010, 15:59:09 UTC

haha XD I'm glad you liked it! thank you! :D

tokene January 5 2010, 10:07:00 UTC

/flails like crazy

Ohhhhhhh Germany. I loved how the truth accidentally slipped out at the end and he tried to correct it, but Italy just laughed and understood and let it be and and and--

/dies from all the cute

Strangely enough, I don't think I've seen diced pineapples before. You know, cube form. Poor Germany, walking all over town just to find them.

the simple sweet light of everything they did for each other.

I especially loved this line. Probably because it's just so true and it quite nicely sums up the two of them, like how Germany just keeps finding himself doing things for Italy even though he has no idea why he does them lD

I talk too much. But I loved this! Even though I'm not such a big GerIta fan, ahah~

inuyashacooks January 5 2010, 16:03:59 UTC

/8DDDD

thankyouuu! I'm glad you liked even though you're not a big fan of them. I notice that for being the most canon pairing in Hetalia, they don't have a very large fanbase it's entirely because they're boring |D

hm, never? I've actually never eaten any other kind of pineapple :O it be a mystery. actually the ones in rings kind of scare me ;(