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fanfic100: Five More Minutes (Persona 3/SEES)

Apr 19, 2011 03:18

Title: Five More Minutes
Fandom: Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 3
Characters: the female main character (Minako), Akihiko, Koromaru
Prompt: #33-too much
Word Count: 2,163
Rating: PG/K
Notes: Requested by yellow_rawr; de-anon from shirakawablvd. And as you probably already know, I do not own Persona 3 or its characters...sadly.
Little Damn Table: Here ♥

( Her life had become a balancing act, and she wondered if it wasn't getting to be a bit too much... )

fandom: persona 3, fanfic, character: minako arisato (♀mc), character: koromaru, character: akihiko sanada, challenge: fanfic100

Comments 9

azure15 April 19 2011, 20:57:29 UTC

This is so beautifully written ♥ You capture both Minako and Akihiko perfectly, along with their relationship!

amm_fanworks April 20 2011, 01:32:48 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it :D

*laugh* And I just saw your post on the P3 comm -- it looks like we're theme-prompt writing buddies! ^_~ If I didn't have this paper to write, I'd read your fic tonight, aaghh D: *flails and kicks schoolwork*

sunnysummoner April 20 2011, 00:50:36 UTC

I think you did a wonderful job. I really liked the way you kept the pace consistent throughout the story.

amm_fanworks April 20 2011, 01:33:48 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

moonlightnoctis April 25 2011, 04:38:30 UTC

Now I can comment! Mwahahaha-cough-

I usually don't like AkixMshe fanfics because people tend to write him OOC, but this fanfic was amazing. I can actually imagine Aki saying/doing these things. This has got to be my favorite AkixMshe fluff story I've ever read. ^^

amm_fanworks April 25 2011, 15:08:30 UTC

Awww, thank you so much! I'm so flattered and I'm so glad that you liked it that much ;^; This was my first time writing Akihiko, to be honest, so I'm especially happy that you liked my characterization of him. <3

And your icon is super adorable!

moonlightnoctis April 25 2011, 20:29:36 UTC

Hahaha! Yes, it was really good! ^^

And thanks x3

yellow_rawr April 29 2011, 08:12:40 UTC

THANK YOU

I'm totally naming my dog Koromaru one day. But other than that this was cute. <3
I wish I had a guy friend like Akikhiko D:

amm_fanworks May 3 2011, 22:07:38 UTC

Ack, I totally forgot to respond to this, lmao. Been busy lately - but you're very welcome! I'm glad you liked it. I wish I had a friend like Akihiko too XD

And heeey you mentioned Koromaru in your prompt ;) Besides, he is adorable~ (I would totally name my dog after him, too haha)