Comments | amles80: Bad!fic: The Lifesaver

amles80

Bad!fic: The Lifesaver

Mar 02, 2011 23:27

Title: The Lifesaver
Fandom: Heroes
Rating/Genre: PG/fluff, femslash, badfic
Characters/Pairing: Kate ‘Kitty-Cat’ Bennet and her family, Angela and her sons, Sylar; Kate/Angela
Summary: Did you guys know that Claire has an older (adopted) sister? She has the ability to heal other people. That’s a good ability to have in season three.
Word count: ( Read more... )

genre: crack, character: noah bennet, pairing: angela/ofc, character: angela petrelli, character: ofc, genre: femslash, !fanfic, rating: pg, length: oneshot, *fandom: heroes

Comments 14

Bad!Review for Bad!Fic! by Jackie Velvietta jackvelvet March 3 2011, 00:38:58 UTC

OMG. Claire doesn't have a sister, LOL. And then u changed the ending!!!! Maybe u should edit ur stuff, take out ur crossouts and stuff and them so y ou can give us a better storie!

-Jackie

(So full of LOL. I especially loved the bit about bird DNA. Because I so wonder those things.)

Re: Bad!Review for Bad!Fic! by Jackie Velvietta amles80 March 3 2011, 12:35:16 UTC

Thanks for the concrit Jackie, that's so helpful! Maybe you can beta read my next fic and check my spelling and typos, it looks like you're very good at these things. *is sarcastic*

(Thank you!! <3 Yes, Mohinder knows all about bird DNA!!)

sylar March 3 2011, 00:48:12 UTC

Hey Sylar doesn't like being dead or eaten by birds! Great story. It's so, so bad.

amles80 March 3 2011, 12:41:52 UTC

Oh. My sincerest apologies!! *gives Sylar cookies* Thanks, I'm glad you hated liked it.

gpgurl50 March 3 2011, 05:31:25 UTC

I love your bad fic. Oops Nathan looks very dead. That can happen. But banging his mom is an adequate reward for saving him. Great job.

amles80 March 3 2011, 12:45:05 UTC

Thank you! Yes, a hero should be rewarded, shouldn't she? ;) I'm glad you liked it.

Bad!review for a good!friend! kidarania_nika March 3 2011, 14:14:56 UTC

Ughhhh, wth you mofo! This doesn't make any sense!! The story isn't even sequential-- what kind of moron can't write a cohesive and you're not supposed to say "the end" 'cause its just like saying ohhh I cant think of a way to end this and what's with all of the sentences that arcrossed out I cant completely dead! Good ol' Princess Bride... <3

Re: Bad!review for a good!friend! amles80 March 3 2011, 15:11:12 UTC

cuz kate's a cat person and thats totally canon for the bennet famly

*ROFL* That's just.... *lol*

Wow, you really have a talent for writing bad reviews, who would have known! (Why don't we give another award in the category "Best Bad!review"?!) I can't even think of anything else to say. <3

Re: Bad!review for a good!friend! kidarania_nika March 3 2011, 15:38:53 UTC

Hahaha, why thank you! I'm having more fun with the reviews than should be legal, honestly. Yours, especially, because I really didn't want to insult you so I had to make it absurd! <3

I like the idea of an award for bad!reviews! We should spread that around :D it could really catch on!

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amles80 March 31 2011, 16:29:07 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! :D I really tried so hard to make it bad and I wrote the other ones just because I had so much fun with this one. (It's my own favourite of the three. *blushes*)

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3