Democracy

Dec 12, 2010 21:51

Title: Democracy
Fandom: Heroes
Rating/Genre: PG/slash, fluff
Characters/Pairing: Matt Parkman, Mohinder Suresh, Molly Walker, Peter Petrelli, Matt/Mohinder
Summary: All parents need some “alone time” away from their kids, and so do Matt and Mohinder. Mohinder has a great idea about what to do together.
Word count: 1 800
Spoilers/Warnings: No.
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character: peter petrelli, pairing: mohinder/matt, character: matt parkman, character: mohinder suresh, !fanfic, character: molly walker, rating: pg, length: oneshot, for cmarie972, *fandom: heroes

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errandofmercy December 13 2010, 05:01:41 UTC
Aww, this was adorable :) I especially loved Mohinder's bold, "Don't accept heteronormativity!" Poor Matt probably doesn't even know what that means.. XD

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amles80 December 16 2010, 22:32:01 UTC
Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked it. No, poor Matt, he probably doesn't know... ;)

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kidarania_nika February 13 2011, 15:24:41 UTC
There's something wrong with people: Why didn't more people comment on this?! Or is there a stack of comment cards by the door that I didn't notice? Well, fine, people. I guess I have to make mine count.

It was floaty, in such a good way. Matt was all shy and Mohinder was all man, and Molly's such a good sport. "Hearing" her say she enjoyed Mrs. Petrelli's company made my jaw drop. I almost did a double take: Did she mean Angela or Heidi? But then the next comment made me think Molly truly did mean Angela Petrelli, and my eyebrows went even higher into my unbrushed hairline. That's insane. Molly's a saint! Or Angela has really settled down. I'm not sure which...but either way, this family truly works together.

~Kei

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amles80 February 13 2011, 15:53:03 UTC
Awww, thank you!! <3 And yes, I admit that I was a little disappointed because of the lack of comments but maybe not so many people even read it at all. (I mean, I know I'm not one of the Matt/Mo masters but I think I've written worse stories!) But anyway, your comments counts very much, I'm so happy to know that you like this!

I got the inspiration for this when I saw a gay couple dance jive on TV and I immediately thought "Matt and Mohinder, yay!" I had fun writing their dialogue. Then with Molly and Angela, I admit that I didn't put lots of thought into it, but I was imagining a combination of what you suggests. Molly's a good, smart girl, and while Angela is not acting all maternal and cooing with her, she might have settled down a bit. (I mean, I know she dodn't even know that her own grandson was allergic to strawberries but maybe she's sorry about that...) Or blame my taste for putting Angela into most things I write. ;) Anyway, I'm glad you think this works!

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kidarania_nika February 13 2011, 15:56:04 UTC
I think I'll blame the strawberry thing. (And your muse for being addicted to Angela. :P~)

Teehee~ I'm just working my way through all of your slash!fic... Well, not *all*. But a good chunk.

~Kei

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amles80 February 13 2011, 16:14:01 UTC
Ha ha. I admit that I don't always know what I'm doing... ;)

Wow, yeah, I can see that you're reading...!! Thank you for showing such an interest and appreciation! <3

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