Comments | amles80: Normal Dreams

amles80

Normal Dreams

Dec 04, 2010 16:22

Title: Normal Dreams
Fandom: Heroes
Rating: G
Characters/Pairing: Angela/Arthur, Adam
Summary: As a young mother, Angela is having disturbing dreams that she does not want to think about as precognitions. They are just normal dreams. She asks Adam for advice, thinking that someone his age surely has an answer.
Word count: 768
Spoilers/Warnings: No ( Read more... )

prompt: heroes_contest, rating: g, pairing: angela/arthur, character: angela petrelli, character: arthur petrelli, !fanfic, length: oneshot, character: adam monroe, *fandom: heroes

Comments 10

eternal_moonie December 5 2010, 13:55:45 UTC

Woohoo!!! Awesome story honey! *hugs*

amles80 December 6 2010, 12:47:25 UTC

Thank you very much, thanks for reading and commenting. :)

ibonekoen December 8 2010, 16:40:55 UTC

This was a great fic. There needed to more interaction with Angela and Adam on the show. It would've been epic. I'm madly in love with Angela; she's such a fierce woman, and this is a lovely glimpse into her past.

amles80 December 8 2010, 20:02:55 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it, and wow, you have no idea how it makes me smile when someone says they love Angela; I don't hear that a lot! :D Thanks for reading and commenting!

ibonekoen December 8 2010, 20:45:49 UTC

I don't know why more people don't like Angela. I mean, yes, she's manipulative and she probably won't be winning any Mother of the Year awards but she's just so cool about it. It takes a lot to frazzle her.

amles80 December 8 2010, 20:59:22 UTC

Yes, exactly!! :)

wgail December 11 2010, 21:43:46 UTC

Great job with the prompt! I love your characterization of Angela and how her dreams impact her interactions with others. She is a powerful female character and makes "icy" seem "hot" :) You also did a wonderful job with Adam. He was definitely an underused character in Heroes.

amles80 December 12 2010, 18:04:45 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

makes "icy" seem "hot" - Yes, exactly. I'm glad you see the way I think. ;)

Thanks a lot! I was a little unsure about Adam, but their little chat just popped up in my head so I had to write it, I'm glad you liked it. :)

jackvelvet December 13 2010, 19:07:40 UTC

What I said to my computer when I finished reading this: "Oooh, I liked this."

Your first time writing Adam? I think it worked out brilliantly. And you've explored a dynamic between he and Angela that I had no idea existed until now. GREAT fic!

amles80 December 13 2010, 21:52:07 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! :D

Haha, thanks! I think that’s something that happens when someone writes a character for the first time; out comes something other people didn’t know existed… isn’t that funny it seemed so obvious to me. ;)