Comments | amles80: Beastly Bob

amles80

Beastly Bob

Oct 10, 2010 17:37

Title: Beastly Bob
Fandom: Heroes
Rating/Genre: G/horror-fluff? Parental angst?
Characters/Pairing: The Bennet Family; Noah/Sandra (references to Bob and Elle)
Summary: Claire and Lyle want their dad to tell them a scary story, but Noah isn’t that good at making things up…
Word count: 1 491
Spoilers/Warnings: No./Don’t expect to be too scared…
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pairing: noah/sandra, character: noah bennet, character: lyle bennet, rating: g, character: claire bennet, !fanfic, prompt: heroes_faves, genre: fluff, length: oneshot, *fandom: heroes, ensemble: heroes (bennet family)

Comments 8

raissad October 10 2010, 19:30:08 UTC

That rocked. :)

amles80 October 10 2010, 21:51:47 UTC

Thank you!! :D

jackvelvet October 10 2010, 20:45:39 UTC

This was fun! Beastly Bob made me laugh. ^_^

I really like these lines:

“Dad, what if you have to go to the haunted house and one of the ghosts follows you home?”

CREEPY!

“Are you sure?” Claire is still not convinced. “What if the ghosts can take people and bring them to Beastly Bob?”

This one I especially liked. Secret Agents are often referred to as "spooks," which obviously is another word for "ghost." ^_^ I enjoy hidden treasures in sentences like that. Little things like that add another layer (and in this case, having the line delivered by a child packs in more flavor).

Good job! And thank you for participating in the event! ^_^

amles80 October 10 2010, 22:00:44 UTC

*smile* I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you for digging up treasures. Hmm, now that you say it, I think that I have heard that about "spooks", but I was not thinking about it when I wrote the story, ha ha!

Events like this are always fun! Thank you for the comment!

wgail October 10 2010, 22:44:14 UTC

I really liked this story. Great use of the prompt. I'm sure the real adventures of "Beastly Bob" would make for some great horror stories. Poor Elle :(

amles80 October 11 2010, 11:22:45 UTC

Thank you! I didn't think it was such a great use of the prompt when I wrote it, but it was the only thing I could come up with and I'm glad it works! After all, sometimes Heroes is just one big horror story. ;)

dref22 October 10 2010, 23:09:22 UTC

Great story! So much fun to read! "Beastly Bob" was a great touch. XD I just love how this story is actually their real life. :D Those "Clairebear"s melted my heart. Guh.

amles80 October 11 2010, 11:31:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm so relieved, I was afraid that this wasn't going to work at all, but I'm glad to see that some people like it. :) Thanks for reading and commenting!