Comments | amles80: Indian Breakfast (More Than Friends 5/5)

amles80

Indian Breakfast (More Than Friends 5/5)

Jun 19, 2010 20:32

TitleIndian Breakfast
Fandom: Heroes
Rating/Genre: g/fluff, slash
Prompt: Heroes, Matt/Mohinder, breakfast (Molly's POV), requested by anthimeriate in comment_fic
Characters/Pairing: Molly Walker, Matt/Mohinder
Summary: It is the morning after Mohinder’s return from India, and Molly is hoping that she won’t have to go to school. Mohinder says that he and Matt have ( Read more... )

prompt: comment_fic, genre: slash, rating: g, pairing: mohinder/matt, character: matt parkman, character: mohinder suresh, series: more than friends, !fanfic, length: serial, character: molly walker, genre: fluff, *fandom: heroes

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starrdust411 June 21 2010, 02:09:26 UTC

This was such a cute end to this series. I loved how Molly kinda forced Matt to say he loved Mo, just cause and I also liked that her mind went right back to avoiding school. LOL. Such a little girl :D

I have to admit though -- and I don't mean to be rude or nitpicky -- but when Matt was talking about missing people who were gone, it seemed more like something Mohinder should have said since he's lost his father and Matt hasn't really lost anyone who was important to him (as far as I know. His mom could be dead, it's never discussed)

amles80 June 21 2010, 21:48:26 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. And you have a very good point there. I didn't think that far but I agree, thanks for telling me, I appreciate it! :)

cmarie972 June 21 2010, 20:07:12 UTC

I agree, so cute. Molly's point of vue is really interesting, and delicate. You can let your imagination go for a walk during this night.
I am so happy you finished your story, I was waiting for it (I am not sure about the conjugation)

amles80 June 21 2010, 21:52:10 UTC

I'm glad to hear that you were waiting and I'm sorry I made you wait so long. :) I'm very happy that you like this. Merci :D

kidarania_nika February 15 2011, 10:10:36 UTC

How old is Molly in this? I love her voice. She's immature and confident, but fragile and sensitive, and her feelings are always a bit too strong! :D Perfect characterization.

~Kei

amles80 February 15 2011, 21:40:03 UTC

I'm thinking maybe eight - nine. I'm glad you like this, I'm not really sure about child characterization, my cousin has a nine-year-old but I don't spend that much time with her.

kidarania_nika February 15 2011, 21:59:13 UTC

Well, you've got this age down pat. ^^ Well, the sweet side of it, anyway. The growling, I-Am-My-Own-Person side is neatly avoided by having her be so worried about her daddies.

amles80 February 16 2011, 14:43:07 UTC

:)
I'm writing adult!Molly right now, let's see how I manage that.

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