Fic for elanielyn (2/2)

Nov 06, 2011 10:48

Fic for elanielyn part 2/2

Title: Of Cherry Blossoms and Paid Escorts
Pairing: Kame/Yamapi
Word count: 13,699
Rating: NC-17
Genre/Warnings: Fluff, angst, smut/Attempted wittiness and bad jokes
Notes: Very, very loosely based on a movie called ‘The Wedding Date’, screenplay by Dana Fox. I can’t emphasize how little this is actually based on it, but it deserves to ( Read more... )

kame/yamapi, a_x 2011, rating: nc-17

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elanielyn November 6 2011, 15:52:06 UTC
MINE THIS IS MINE AND THE BEST THING TO WAKE UP TO AND I'LL START READING AS SOON AS PART 1 GETS POSTED. MIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINE MY PRECIOUS

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elanielyn November 6 2011, 17:21:49 UTC
omg, first off, I love that movie ;A; My aunt and I spent a whole summer watching it again and again and quoting everything, lol, it was such a nice surprise to see this based on it!

A doctor? Kame exhaled deeply and grasped the edge of the bar counter, afraid he might lose his balance. His heart was racing a hundred miles per hour as he repeatedly told himself not to picture Yamashita examining him in a white jacket. Unfortunately, the fantasy seemed persistent on invading his mind.

This needs to happen.

“If you say so,” Kame said, not entirely focused on the situation as he was still fantasizing about getting a full examination from Yamashita-sensei. Now the fantasy included a stethoscope and large amounts of naked skin.

Like, really needs to happen, okay? Why is it not happeniiiiiing.

He was dressed in a simple yet astoundingly gorgeous black suit that licked every curve of his form in the most flattering of ways

God I love this description ;A; /jumps Yamapi.

the patient-doctor fantasy that had tortured him ever since he ( ... )

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reddorozette December 13 2011, 15:27:43 UTC
I suck at commenting, I know, but we already talked on Twitter too so idk, I suppose I can be forgiven :<

You have no idea how happy your comment made me and sfkjsd ♥ When I heard I'd be writing for you, I panicked for days, obsessively finding out what you like and trying to create something you'd enjoy. I was driving myself (and those around me) crazy. I've said this before but I just really respect you as a writer and it was such a huge pressure and omfg. But you liked this and I'm the happiest person ever ♥

I was just imagining the whole scene in pastel tones

Ahahahah, that's what I was doing when I was writing it! Ffff.

PS. I was so amused by all the I want doctor/patient porn comments.

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elanielyn December 13 2011, 19:04:16 UTC
orz why does this happens every time someone who knows me has to write for me, seriously. I'm easy to please ;A; I'm easier than Isaboobs to please, even! Don't panic! I'm a happy puppy who is happy with anything!

I'm fully expecting doctor/pantient porn from you now.

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reddorozette December 14 2011, 13:45:02 UTC
Awww, you're cute D: Oh, well, Isaboobs is hard to please in every aspect of life, I wouldn't even expect to satisfy her anymore *o*

PORN. WHY PORN. PORN IS SO HARD TO WRITE ;---;

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prologuesized November 14 2011, 18:39:21 UTC
Escort fic ♥ And a good one of that, too *o* I'm charmed. I loved this - from your characterization to the story to the writing. It was beautiful and enjoyable ♥

Kame remembered it like it was yesterday, the moment he had first laid his eyes on Akanishi Jin. The cheerful boy with untamed curls and playful, dark eyes had approached him with complete disregard for the gaping difference in their social status, introducing himself with a smile bright enough to completely light up the room. Everyone had looked at Kame warily with high expectations to witness an enraged scene, but instead he had thrown everyone off by welcoming Jin in his inner circle. A year later, they had achieved a permanent status as the most envied couple in school.
This this thissssss ;;A; ♥ I don't even know. I just love this paragraph for some reason, alright.

A doctor? Kame exhaled deeply and grasped the edge of the bar counter, afraid he might lose his balance. His heart was racing a hundred miles per hour as he repeatedly told himself not to picture Yamashita ( ... )

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reddorozette December 13 2011, 15:36:10 UTC
HI. I DIED WHEN I SAW YOU COMMENTED ON THIS.

He's just a human, and fantasies are nice so I'll encourage his, uh, sexual desires ♥

/laughs A lot of people have, to quote you, encouraged his sexual desires in this fic. Everyone is doctor/patient smut deprived?

I loved the chemistry between Yamapi and Kame. It reminded me of the biological explanations of love... Obviously, I spend too much time at school. Human relationships chapters in Psychology ♥

No, no, psychology is ♥ I was surprised that you noticed this because, well, I was obsessed with finding better ways to describe what happens in the human body/brain when they fall in love and, conveniently, I had to study while writing this so I grabbed a lot of things from my psychology books and used that knowledge in this story. So, omg. Points up for you 8D ♥

Okay, I guess I've said everything I wanted to, aklfjds. Except for a simple thank you, for reading and commenting, I'm so incredibly honoured that you liked this *humble bow*

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baybeshyne November 20 2011, 02:42:10 UTC
i loved this movie too! dylan was sooo hot...but yamapi is hotter!
im glad kame found his happiness with pi...even though it didnt work out with jin.
they are totally made for each other...lawyer and doctor.
kame is genuinely happy to see yamapi..after all his time in heartbreak. =)
perfect writing!! thank you for sharing

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reddorozette December 13 2011, 15:42:48 UTC
Dylan was definitely hot, omg, yes. Thank you so much for reading, I'm so glad you liked this, sfksdjf. :)

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jtriskell November 21 2011, 11:59:55 UTC
reddorozette December 13 2011, 15:43:50 UTC
Omg, I'm happyyy :>

And I noticed your comment in the first part, too. I'm glad you enjoyed my Maru 8DDD Heh.

Thank youuuuuu!

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