Fic for reddorozette (3/5)

Nov 05, 2011 12:48

Title: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow {3/5}
Written for: reddorozette
Pairing: pikame (& a bit of ryokame)
Words: 36 427
Rating: PG-15? (somewhere between PG-13 and R)
Notes: thank you very much to my beta!!!!! <3333
Summary: From the first moment that he met Kamenashi Kazuya, Yamashita Tomohisa knew, just knew, that somehow, he had done something horrible to the ( Read more... )

kame/yamapi, kame/ryo, rating: r, a_x 2011

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reddorozette November 5 2011, 23:07:41 UTC
He had to make sure it wasn’t real; he had to make sure that those dark feelings were only in his dreams, that the hurt he so eagerly dealt out in his nightmares wasn’t real.

Yamapi breathed out a loud sigh. He held a hand over his heart, which was beating erratically; those dark, vicious emotions he felt in his nightmares were becoming more and more real with each nightmare. They were getting darker and stronger, and what they left him feeling when he woke up scared the hell out of him.

This is starting to creep me out, really. What's going on. WHAT ARE THE DREAMS. WHAT'S HAPPENING.

“I -” Yamapi tried to come up with an explanation. A good one. That didn’t involve explaining that he had constant nightmares that involved a form of himself lashing out at a form of Kamenashi, which left him shuddering at the dark feelings in the nightmare form of himself’s heart ( ... )

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songkissed November 15 2011, 06:33:01 UTC
I'm actually pretty pleased to see that what was happening with the dreams wasn't entirely obvious :DDD I wanted that bit of suspense in there too haha :) so i'm happy to hear that it worked! :D and i'm flattered, lol, you neglected Johnny Depp for this fic ♥ XDD

I noticed these connection a little earlier than they were brought up in the story <---- um, my excuse is that Pi is a bit slower at connecting things than you are? :DDD

& And I should have washed my mascara off before reading this D: lol, i'm amused, but that's probably a good warning to put in a fic warning next time LOL. 'dangerous if you're wearing eye makeup' XDDD

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