I'm very sorry about all my comments pointing out real or false errors. I did stop myself from demanding more commas in some places, because I'm not sure if those commas would have followed a rule or just how *I* write main clauses, with different subjects, connected with "and".
Anyway, very, very sorry. I promise never to point out any errors in the future.
I really enjoyed the story. :) *goes hide in her little corner*
Glad you enjoyed the fic and I don't mind sorting through what I agree and disagree with, but next time? Throw them all into one comment, it makes it easier to deal with and doesn't skew my comment count. ;)
Anyway, very, very sorry. I promise never to point out any errors in the future.
I really enjoyed the story. :) *goes hide in her little corner*
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