Comments | amidalashari: Of All The Gin Joints

amidalashari

Of All The Gin Joints

Dec 22, 2007 19:48

Title: Of All The Gin Joints
Fandom: Gilmore Girls
Pairing(s): Jamie/Paris
Word Count: 2349
Rating: PG-13

Summary: She wonders when she became the kind of girl who has guys showing up at her place unannounced.

Notes: Future-fic. Written for stateofsoul for elite_ggxchange. Lyrics are from Duke Of Earl by Gene Chandler and Walk Like A Man by The Four Seasons. Spoilers ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

adinarj December 23 2007, 02:29:45 UTC

Oh, Paris.

Jamie was sweet, if unmemorable, and I'm glad you gave him a personality. Paris was Paris, and not over-the-top.

This whole thing was sweet and wonderful. Thank you!

amidalashari December 26 2007, 20:06:31 UTC

Thanks! I wanted to show a slightly more mellowed-out Paris as she grew up, but still recognisably Paris, so yay :D

pencil_gal December 23 2007, 05:06:31 UTC

This was lovely.

I always liked Paris and Jamie together, and this shows both of them so well. It was all the tiny details that made me love it (My parents couldn't make it." He knows what that means as well as she does, Sometimes she waits to see Rory's face in front of her., she tells herself that she needed to shave her legs, anyway., and the bit about the different wines).

And the ending was perfect. A very Paris reaction, needing the time to think but still very hopeful.

A very sweet and wonderful piece :)

amidalashari December 26 2007, 20:07:06 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

gah_warrior March 16 2008, 06:35:04 UTC

Found this while searching through old posts on gg_fic. There really isn't enough Paris stuff out there, and this is fantastic - I particularly love your older!Paris characterization. Awesome.

amidalashari March 17 2008, 15:34:30 UTC

Thank you! There really should be more Paris fic :)