Comments | amidalashari: We Could Do The Tango

amidalashari

We Could Do The Tango

Oct 19, 2007 17:52

Title: We Could Do The Tango
Fandom: Arrested Development
Pairing(s): Michael/Lindsay
Word Count: 475
Rating: R

Summary: Sometimes, it's about saying goodbye.

Notes: Set pre-series, so no spoilers.

( And she said that's it, and I knew it )

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amidalashari October 25 2007, 01:02:36 UTC

Thanks! xox

rockstarjoker4 October 30 2007, 20:22:09 UTC

Wonderful! Thanx for writing it!!!

amidalashari October 31 2007, 00:42:34 UTC

Thanks :)

stop_theworld October 31 2007, 00:36:54 UTC

Michael/Lindsay fic, yay!

I loved when she played out the scenario in her head, and then back in the present "he's still kissing her." That was written wonderfully.

his lips are red, his cheeks flushed, and she thinks, I did that. GUH.

The last two little sections are great, with the comment she doesn't make and the last line that KILLS me. I love the way you got inside her head. Great job!

amidalashari October 31 2007, 00:43:23 UTC

Thank you so much!

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amidalashari January 23 2008, 02:04:04 UTC

Thank you! :D

pixie180 August 28 2011, 05:16:35 UTC

That was so wrong...yet so right!