White

[amidalashari]

Title: White
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Pairing(s): Logan/Veronica
Word Count: 2784
Rating: NC-17

Summary: Lilly thinks Veronica needs to have some fun; and at Shelly Pomroy's party, she's going to make sure Veronica does just that.

Notes: AU. Set pre-series; spoilers for episode 1:21 - A Trip To The Dentist. Written for fivebyfiction prompt "Love Potion #9."

Comments

[afrocurl]

What a nice alternative to what really happened.

Adding a living Lilly to the mix for Shelley's party was an interesting twist, and I really appreciated that subtle thoughts from Logan as he realized that he wanted something from this (even if they were aided by the GHB.)

[amidalashari]

Thanks! :D

[suddenlyeyesee]

this was amazing.totally and utterly amazing. I want a sequal. please and thank you.

[amidalashari]

Thank you! I don't think there'll be a sequel, but I appreciate it :)

[anonymous]

Sorry, this is very well written but the plot creeps me out. Logan would not sleep with Veronica when he knew she'd been drugged unwittingly; he just wouldn't do it. It's creepy and I don't wish this has happened as it transforms Logan from someone who protects Veronica into someone who takes advantage of her. This is near-rape and it's just WRONG. Don't act like it's an okay thing to happen because it's not.

[amidalashari]

Thanks for the feedback, but I'm not "acting like it's an okay thing to happen"; it's fiction. I write about a lot of things I don't necessarily condone, and in this case, the moral ambiguity of Logan's actions were an intentional part of the narrative, meant to highlight the comparison with the events of the party in canon.

[havemy_heart]

I don't think it's near-rape at all. Veronica was a lot more cognizant here than in canon, and Logan asked her if she was sure before they went too far. Veronica was an actual participant instead of being borderline unconscious. There may be slight moral ambiguity, but I don't think Logan took advantage of her. And even though Veronica couldn't remember every single second of what had happened, she was completely fine with waking up next to Logan and realizing they had slept together.

[amidalashari]

Thank you - that's pretty much exactly what I was going for. There's definitely room for people to make up their own minds, but overall, I did intend it to fall within the "acceptable" range (at least as much as, and possibly more so than, what happened between her and Duncan in canon, and Veronica readily accepts that as not having been rape, so ...)

Of course, I don't mind if people read it differently, but I did think being accused of condoning rape was a bit much ;)

[sodapop_09er]

i pretty much heart this alternative.

very sweet. very...nice. :)

[amidalashari]

Thank you!

[smiles1_9]

This was a very interesting alternative to the events that actually took place. I won't lie, I was a little nervous when Lilly gave Veronica the drugs, and then a little nervous at the end when she really didn't remember what happened, but I like that Logan was the one to take care of her all at the same time realizing that he had more than "just a friend" feelings for her.

Very intereesting, I enjoyed it.

[amidalashari]

Thanks! :D