Immutable

Jun 07, 2007 12:55

Title: Immutable
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing(s): Peter/Claire
Word Count: 168
Rating: PG-13

Summary: They’re in a constant state of motion.

Notes: Spoilers up to episode 1:19 - .07%. Written for fivebyfiction prompt “inertia.”

Objects in space )

heroes: peter, heroes: claire, heroes: peter/claire, heroes, fivebyfiction

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amidalashari June 7 2007, 05:31:10 UTC
Thanks :)

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serenelystrange June 7 2007, 17:25:27 UTC
Aww, it's so sweet but sad! Beautiful little story, :)

By the way, kudos for finding the one good thing about that god awful Fergie song and making it an icon! :D

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amidalashari June 8 2007, 00:25:14 UTC
Thanks!

(If you mean this icon, I didn't make it; it's by cordy_jay :D)

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serenelystrange June 8 2007, 01:09:03 UTC
I actually meant the icon with Milo and the slicked back hair sitting on the sofa.. but this one is nice too, lol. :)

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amidalashari June 8 2007, 13:35:35 UTC
In that case, it's by bruisedcreation :)

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tju_tju_tju_tju June 7 2007, 20:26:19 UTC
That was great. It flowed really nicely. Good job. *pats you on head and gives you cookie*

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amidalashari June 8 2007, 00:26:54 UTC
Thank you :D

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inthevast August 6 2007, 21:42:43 UTC
Ooooooh. I love it. The words are so nice and clean, and fall into such a great, almost poetic rhythm. If Peter and Claire would ever have a relationship, and by the looks they give each other, they definitely would if they weren't related, this ficlet would be them. Utterly and completely.

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amidalashari August 7 2007, 02:35:51 UTC
Ooh, thanks so much for the feedback! :D

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