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amichevole

Return to Oz, Part Three

Aug 14, 2010 01:20

It was almost five when Dean pulled into the visitor’s parking lot of the D.C hotel. It wasn’t the same place he’d stayed in last time; though he doubted they’d remember him, he wanted to maintain some semblance of anonymity.

Castiel in tow, he made his way to reception, credit card bearing the name “Eric McCreary” in hand. Eric McCreary was in ( Read more... )

crossover, category: het, pairing: dean/emily, universe: demon days, story: return to oz

Comments 6

redrikki August 14 2010, 20:43:00 UTC

That's a chapter end cliffhanger, right? You're not ending the story there?

amichevole August 14 2010, 21:36:42 UTC

Technically, you could call it a story end cliffhanger, but it will pick up again with the next installment.

Thanks for reading :)

dirtymindedho August 15 2010, 00:13:54 UTC

No way! You did not just leave it like that...
Please tell me there will be more in this 'verse...please?
Haha. I loved it. Very angsty and I'm glad that you've kind of shown that the Ambassador does care for Emily and that Emily does love her mother; even if they've had their differences.
I'm so totally confused by that ending though. Please don't just leave it there.
Keep up the fantastic writing! :)

jujuberry136 August 15 2010, 14:03:07 UTC

Why do I have the feeling Ambassador Prentiss is now among the living once again?

Great installment to the story and I can't wait to see where you go from here. I guess Dean should have warned Prentiss about dealing with demons... (but is she really dead?)

amichevole August 15 2010, 14:24:19 UTC

You know, I had actually planned on her trying to bring the team back, but your idea fits in a hell of a lot better with future plot points.

Emily is technically dead, but in the SPN 'verse, that doesn't really mean squat. The plot summary for the next part can be found at the Demon Days masterpost here: http://amichevole.livejournal.com/159377.html

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I am glad that you enjoyed.

metamorphagi August 18 2010, 00:31:27 UTC

Hey! LOVE THIS. I totally didn't expect the Ambassador's death, nor did I expect Emily's. Great twists there. I also love how Cas is in this. He's so awesomely awkward, IT'S FANTASTIC.

And for the record? CRUEL TO LEAVE IT THERE. I get why you did, but still. Cruel. I can't wait for you to continue with this amazing series, I really can't. The rapport between Dean and Emily is great, how they're not really "lovers," just two people that know how to comfort each other, yet without ramifications.

Anyways--keep it up, and I really look forward to more!