[Castle/Firefly: Drabble] "Something Borrowed" [Kate/Jayne, G]

[ami_ven]

Title: Something Borrowed
Author: Ami Ven
Rating: G
Word Count: 300
Prompt: birthday present for bobdeloyd
Fandom: Castle/Firefly (Firefly ‘verse)
Pairing(s): Kate Beckett/Jayne Cobb
Summary: “Oh, sweetie, you’re beautiful. That man ain’t gonna know what hit him.”

Comments

[kensieg]

Very nice, as usual!

You wrote:
"She still didn’t quite understand how she’d walked into a crime scene in 2010 and fallen out of a freakish-looking machine in"

Reads like there's something missing after "in".

[ami_ven]

Thank you!

Yes, good spotting! I wrote this at work where our internet is down, and I forgot to look up what year "Firefly" is set in when I typed it later. Fixed now *g*

[bobdeloyd]

What a perfect birthday gift! Wow! You did it!
I wanted to make it a challenge for you when I asked you to write about these two characters getting married... you did very well, hell you wrote it perfectly! I like the "captain who looked exactly like Castle but wasn’t" part...
Just wait till next year :)

[ami_ven]

You're very welcome, and thank you! Now you have a whole year to think of something as challenging...