Fic ~ Some Things Simply Never Change

Aug 21, 2009 08:50


Oh lookie ~ 6_6

It’s Friday, which means it time for Chapter 06 of Spiral! Yay! This is it guys… it’s the beginning of the second half of the story and things are about to kick into overdrive! The drama, oh the drama! (may also contain smex) <-- Blatant lies... >_<

Title: Spiral (Chapter 06 ~ Reminiscent)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Angst
Pairing: ( Read more... )

sakuraiba, pg-13, muli-chapter, fanfiction

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shiyun88 August 21 2009, 08:29:25 UTC
Don't worry, you aren't evil. Its what keeps readers hooked, storyline aside. =P

This is the first time I'm commenting here. I've read your other fics as well and just thought that it was about time I commented!XD Anyway, I've enjoyed your fics and am looking forward to the next part! Thanks for the great chapter~! (:

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amh1988 August 21 2009, 11:08:17 UTC
You're right of course, but I've never liked it when every chapter ends with a cliffhanger, it kind of feels like cheating. o_O I suppose it only really bothers me at the beginning of a story though. It should be 'Claim them with the storyline early - keep them with the cliffhangers later.' 8D

And thank you for making yourself known. It's great to know that you've enjoyed what I've written, and that it was enough to tempt you out. ^.^ I hope to see you next time too!
~Ami

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saku062 August 21 2009, 08:31:12 UTC
WE'RE FRIDAY!! WE'RE FRIDAY!!! \^o^/

*Off to read*

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saku062 August 21 2009, 08:50:50 UTC
Okayyyyy

YOU'RE EVIL!!! You really love drama, huh? XD
The smut...OMG the smut! I loved it!!! ♥&heats;

Sho is an idiot! Of course he loves Aiba!! WHEN WILL COME THE ONE WHO SHOULD HELP THEM?!!

Aah~ now I have to wait for Tuesday...*sighs*

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amh1988 August 21 2009, 11:11:35 UTC
Hehehe... well, semi-smutish anyway. There is a reason this was rated pg-13, after all.

And if I'm ever lucky enough to find Aiba getting himself half-naked in front of me, I might just do exactly the same thing as Sho...

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glos10 August 21 2009, 08:50:08 UTC
uaaaaah ._.
my my I can totally picture Sho like that, I mean, we're talking about Aiba here, no one can resist him.
but, that was right, and also wrong... now they're breaking even more, can there be at least friendship like this? mmmmm....

I want tomorrow to be Tuesday ._____.

thanks^^

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amh1988 August 21 2009, 11:14:39 UTC
And everything was going so well at the start of this chapter, right? ;) But yeah, half-naked Aiba can have that effect on people. The boy doesn't realise just how dangerous he is!

It's good to see you again, btw. Did you have a nice time on you trip?

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glos10 August 21 2009, 11:37:33 UTC
you remembered *_*
yes, everything went well, good weather, had fun!^^! now back to study ._.

*hugs*

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amh1988 August 21 2009, 12:03:09 UTC
Of course I did!
If you're gonna take the time to tell me, then of course I can make the effort to remember, silly. ^^
*huggles*

At least the studying should be easier now that you've refreshed your brain, right?

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huey_tsai August 21 2009, 09:56:29 UTC
OHMY. D:

I feel bad for Aiba-chan and Sho. D:

DAYUM IT. I'm excited for the next chapter, I wanna read it now~ :)) OMG

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amh1988 August 21 2009, 11:18:21 UTC
Ah~ I feel bad too...
*Is totally responsible for current state of affairs*

Oh well, I'm just adding some more issues to there confusion before we reach the conclusion, huh? I wonder how that's gonna pan out?

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maibachan August 21 2009, 10:26:43 UTC
This was beautiful in a really painful way...
*sighs*
I totally understand it, and I love it.
If you could share an ounce of your talent with me, it would be greatly appreciated...in other words, lend me your brain!!!:p
Thank you for another wonderful chap!

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amh1988 August 21 2009, 11:22:13 UTC
You can have my brain if you want; I've kind of broken it on writing this story though...

I'm so glad you like it! And that you get it too. It's difficult to make people see both sides of the story, and to see that neither one of them is the 'bad guy'. They're just painfully mixed up.

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