Future Unknown: Freefall

[amfiguree]

[Pre-slash] [American Idol] [David Archuleta/David Cook] [PG-13]

All previous parts can be found here. And, as always, don't forget to check out the most amazing website accompaniment that the fawesome starafar set up for us! ♥

Comments

[al_hazel]

OH MY HECK. ASLAJHFSHFKLJSLJHFGSHDGAJSGADL.

THIS IS SO FREAKING AWESOME.

Cook being all lonely without Archie. I LOVE HOW COOK TURNED AND ASKED FOR ARCHIE'S ADVICE INSTINCTIVELY, only to realise Archie isn't there :( Poor Cook.

shit, just archie being so ninja subtle, then jared and dean gives him away, and cook tries to solve it, and THEN THE ENTIRE FREAKING BATHROOM SCENE.

THE LOCK THAT DIDN'T WORK, I love how you worked that into the conversation then into the plot so amazingly. Then OMG, Cook is in the bathroom WITH Archie, OMG.

I can't wait to read more, and I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THE DEVELOPMENT IN THIS CHAPTER.

SO AWESOME.

[epicflailer]

OH MY GOOOOOOOOSH, i am so pleased you liked this! especially since i was really ridiculously worried about where this was going, bahaha. plus THE BATHROOM SCENE, DOUBLY PLEASED YOU LIKE. :D :D :D

tysm for the fb~

[hopefulgenius]

FSDLKJFS:DLKFJ:SDLFKJS:DKLFJS:DLFKJ HANG ON

[hopefulgenius]

BATHROOM SCENE. THERE'S A MOTHERFUCKING BATHROOM SCENE. plus, holy shit, holy shit, YOU FEATURED MORE JENSEN AND JARED AND DEAN. i love dean, idk, is there a sam in this verse? we could totally never feature him, of course; OH MY GOSH, IS THERE A GHOST IN THIS APARTMENT? IS IT THE GHOST OF UST? probably.

okay, first off, NOT FAIIIIIIIIIR. you just want me to have archie jerking off, is that it? THAT SCENE IS GOING TO FUEL HIS UNWANTED FANTASIES FOR FOREVER, THANKS. :( hummmm, i think perhaps an intervention is going to take place.

(oh my gosh, i've got an idea!)

oh my goodness, though, WAY TO DO TONS OF STUFF IN ONE CHAPTER WITHOUT ADVANCING THE ARGUMENT. >:( idk, idk, i am so excited about this chapter but every time you update all i can think is I HAVE TO FOLLOW THIS?!?! WHYYYYYYYYYY.

augh, idk, everything about cook is making me dizzy and confused and SAD. IDK LSKDJF:SLKDFJS:DKLFJS:DKLFJ THIS VERSE IS GOING TO BE THE DEATH OF ME.

[epicflailer]

I DID. I EVEN TRIED TO MAKE IT MORE EXPLICIT AND I JUST - I COULDN'T. I TOTALLY CHICKENED OUT LIKE THE SUCKER I AM, GRR. (also, hi, if you wanted to feature sam in this verse? i wouldn't say no! UNLESS HE CAME TO VANQUISH THE GHOST OF UST, IN WHICH CASE I WOULD HAVE TO PROTEST VEHEMENTLY.)

and i cannot lie, that crossed my mind. maybe. a little. and then i went to bathe in holy water. (I AM EXCITED FOR YOUR IDEA, BTW.)

aaaaaaaaand at least now i know i'm not the only one struck with FEAR at the end of each new episode. SORRY I TOTALLY LEFT YOU WITH THE HEAVY LIFTING FOR THIS ONE.

also you really shouldn't be sad for cook. HIS FATE IS IN YOUR HANDS. you could just fix it! or, you know, let him do his emo-angsting thing a little longer. who knows what he'd do out of desperation~

[bloodbelieve]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.

*FLAIL*

I don't -- I don't even -- oh my gosh, I never know what to say, because this is all so awesome and your Cook voice and -- the shower! I just. WOW. Hi. This is awesome.

[epicflailer]

heeeeeee! THANK YOU FOR FLAILING. and the lovely fb! :D :D :D

i'm just glad this worked for you, because things are just starting to get all heavy~ thank you again!

[asweetdownfall]

Oh my gosh, NAAAAAAAAT. There's just no limit to your awesome, is there? <3333

I LOVE THIS. And OH MY GOD THE BATHROOM SCENE AND DAVID'S EPIPHANY and fuck I am dead from your amazing writing, seriously.

PLEASE LET THIS VERSE NEVER END.

[epicflailer]

NIIIIIIIIIIT. I AM SO PLEASED YOU LIKED THIS. <33333333 and that those two scenes (in particular) worked for you! \o/ \o/ \o/

MY JOB IS DONE. TY FOR THE AWESOME FB. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[dmlpacker]

Gah. AND NOW I HAVE TO WAIT FOR THE NEXT EPISODE, IN WHICH BOTH BOYS REALIZE HOW BLIND THEY ARE. *flail*

[epicflailer]

*giggles* SORRY?