Take These Sunken Eyes and Learn To See

[americanaffair]

Title: Take These Sunken Eyes and Learn To See
Chapter: 3
Author: americanaffair 
Beta: passiontothesky 
Pairing: Jalex
Rating: NC-17
POV: 3rd
Summary: Alex doesn't know what he's been buying online when he gets drunk. But one of them show up at his house on a Saturday.
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone. They belong to each other themselves. Title

Comments

[mcrefob]

I"m so confused.

Does Zack like Alex? I think so.

Whoo, go Jack, he totally got into it... You my friend, know how to write. Snap.

[americanaffair]

Haha I'll reveal too much if I try to make it less confusing for you. My advice is to keep reading the chapters :)
Okay, in reality, I'm totally just going with it as I write. But I'm pretty sure I know why Zack is angry.
:) You mean it?! Thank you so much! Lol.

[austinattack]

Ohhhh damn. That was lovely<3
ZACK IS JEALOUS<3

[americanaffair]

:) Thanks babe.
Your icon STILL cracks me up. It will never, ever, not make me smile.
Zack is something alright ;)

[austinattack]

Aw, yay<3
It makes me smile too<333333

[chasingxrabbits]

i love you. I love this story and i love you.

More. You are an AWESOME writer.

[americanaffair]

Aw thank you so much! I was very proud of this chapter. Lol my beta sends it back with the subject line: I don't see why you need me because your too good at English but I'm not complaining because this means I get to read everything first.

I LOVE YOU MORE. GODDAMMIT.

[turnthepageover]

I'm sensing a little jealousy.
And a little bit more hostility.
Both from Zackary.
YES, THEY DID IT.
Alex isn't being a weirdo anymore!
It was totally hot.
I love this story :D

[americanaffair]

Zackary is a bit emotional. Lol.
I KNOW! I was gonna prolong it, but then I got a better idea. ;)
I love youuu. And I have things to have you beta in like an hour.

[turnthepageover]

Zackary needs some midol.
I like better ideas, ahha :D
I love you!
Sweet. e-mail me!
Or was I supposed to e-mail you?

[americanaffair]

Haha.
It starts with Zack is jealous/angry
But I'm hoping it's not what everyone is expecting.
I LOVE YOU MOREE!
I'll email you, yeah. Lol.

[leighabelle]

Oh god.. I can't even.. This story..
I don't even know what to say. I learned something after reading this chapter, though, and that is that sex with a robot is fucking hot!
Can't wait to read more because you are a terrific writer!
=D

[americanaffair]

Haha.
Dude I wrote this sex scene and I was like, if this sucks, I'm quitting livejournal. Seriously. So if robot sex was a win, that means you guys are stuck with me.
Thank you so so so much! You don't even wanna know what happens to me when many people tell me I'm a really good writer. It involves me and crying.
<3