Comments | amerecles: You are my Sunshine

amerecles

You are my Sunshine

Mar 01, 2011 21:50

I don't usually partake in songfics, but this has been nagging me since one of the chapters of A Language of Their Own. That and a friend requested a drabble and I missed another friend's birthday. So I'm being lazy and rolling it all up into one. So Bela, I hope you like this and Happy way way way way way late Birthday, Jamie!!

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amerecles March 2 2011, 07:50:59 UTC

Thank you so much =w= I'm glad it enjoyed and surprised you.

ilovelamp619 March 2 2011, 06:25:17 UTC

lol, Yandere!Al is the best kind of Al! It was quite chillin to say the least...*shivers*

That song was like, my lullaby since I was...gosh a baby! Though it was only that one verse, so I don't think my mom knew the rest of the song or it's meaning anyway. :/

So if I dream about sunflowers will Alfred be at the end of the row waiting with a bloody pipe? XD

amerecles March 2 2011, 07:53:32 UTC

Oh god, you don't know how much that made me laugh. I doubled over in my chair xDDD

Thanks for the comment!

ahmerst March 2 2011, 06:30:49 UTC

Man, I was not expecting this. I know the song isn't as happy as most people think it, so I like that as the song progresses things in the story start to go downhill in a hurry.

And I have to say, I especially love this line: "Life wasn't worth living if Ivan had someone else."

Because when you are so in love this is exactly how you get to feeling. It's such a simple and perfect way of describing all the bad emotions love brings with it. When people think and write love, too often they tend to stray into territory where it's all sunshine and rainbows, which is fun, don't get me wrong, but it saddens me to see when the true passion, the intense emotions no one talks about, get glossed over.

Ah, I must say, I quite adore creeper Alfred. It suits him rather nicely! Good job on the wonderful writing!

amerecles March 2 2011, 07:49:58 UTC

Actually, it's a rather fucked up sentiment and anyone who really feels this way when they're in love needs to step back and reexamine their relationship to make sure it's healthy and not co-dependant. The truth is is that life is most definitely worth living without your partner. And true love isn't the fireworks and passion that people make it out to be. True, lasting love can go on even after the intense feelings have died down to a trickle. Love is just as much waking up with morning breath and ordering your partner to brush their teeth before they kiss you so you can get up and take care of the kids as it is any kind of passionate sex. That intense feeling can just as well be infatuation or lust as it can be real, honest love ( ... )