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amerasu1013

Mirror!Pinto Chapter 5i

May 22, 2011 21:58

At long last, I give you...
And *gasp*! Might it be that in this chapter we find out who the evil bad guy is? For realsies? Like, seriously? ;P

Mirror!Pinto Series: Dark Desires
Touch what is mine Chapter 5i

Summary: Zach gets hurt again, and it's Chris' fault. Whoever did this will pay for it, Chris will make sure of that. And he has help.
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ze german is lazy, pairing: chris/zach, aaaah, mirror!pinto, fandom: rps (star trek reboot), ze german has a happy, wooo, series: dark desires, yay, fucking finally, omg

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pomme_noir May 23 2011, 00:50:06 UTC

So, they have finally found their man. I liked the little back story. Oh my darling German, I just know you have something gory planned and I can't wait. Hopefully, it will be topped off with a hot threesome and handcuffs.

amerasu1013 May 28 2011, 02:11:05 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the back story - I rewrote it a couple of times... as for gory, yes, yes, I think I do have something planned... and then some sex afterwards! ;P

jachelle0627 May 23 2011, 03:53:52 UTC

My eyes are like saucers now. This was very intense. Awesome as always and thank you for keeping up with this even though RL is crazy-busy. Those of us addicted to your cliffhangers need our fix ;)

amerasu1013 May 28 2011, 02:12:07 UTC

Aww, thanks! I was in a weird mood when I wrote this - I wrote a ton of seriously fucked up stuff that day, lol. I'm very glad you liked it and more soon, I promise! Thanks again!

inu_spockya May 24 2011, 07:03:46 UTC

woo, you updated!!

narsty, I like this it!!

*chinhands, waiting*

amerasu1013 May 28 2011, 02:13:20 UTC

Haha, thank you! Glad you liked the nasty stuff... more to come! ;P

wolowombat815 May 26 2011, 03:00:58 UTC

AMAZING!!!! <3

amerasu1013 May 28 2011, 02:14:56 UTC

THANK YOU!! XD

medea_fic May 28 2011, 02:02:17 UTC

DUDE. Zach better stay out of it this time and NOT get any ideas into his head. I mean, I sympathise with him totally, wanting to be in on it, but a) he's barely recovered and b) he doesn't have the technical expertise!! :)

Your backstory was phenomenal and despite the fact that Mikail is a murderer, I...felt bad for him. :( Powerful writing right there, bb!! <333

amerasu1013 May 28 2011, 02:17:41 UTC

DUDE. I have no idea yet if Zach is gonna stay out of this! ;P I have two versions of the next chapter in my head, lol. We'll see, we'll see... *rubs hands*
I'm glad you liked the backstory - I wasn't too sure about it and rewrote it a couple of times. I'm glad it seems to work!
And thank you very very much!! <333 right back!