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FIC: Mirror!Pinto Chapter 5c

Nov 29, 2010 20:23

Mirror!Pinto Series: Dark Desires
Chapter 5c: Touch what is mine

Summary: Zach gets hurt again, and it's Chris' fault. Whoever did this will pay for it, Chris will make sure of that. And he has help.
Rating: Explicit/NC-17
Warnings: violence, hurt, angst, explicit sex (I hope - see Author's Notes)
Word Count: ~ 3.000
Disclaimer: Seriously? Not mine, ( Read more... )

pairing: chris/zach, slash, series: dark desires, mirror!pinto, fic, fandom: rps (star trek reboot)

Comments 16

medea_fic November 29 2010, 21:12:33 UTC

\o/ \o/ \o/

I really love your OCs, I don't think I've ever said that before, but they're all so effective and have these immediate personalities that just jump off the page...well, screen. ALex is awesome.

WHO ARE KARL AND CHRIS GOING TO SEE NEXT? Gah. I am SO glad Karl is going along. I think Chris is definitely going to need some back up when they find the Big Fish. :-/

Love the relationship between Chris and Joe, too - really great and well-suited to this AU. :)

amerasu1013 November 29 2010, 21:35:38 UTC

Thank you very much!!! I don't really like writing OCs, so they usually get only a really small role and disappear again quickly. This time though they erm, refused to leave. Yeah. ;-P
Who are thy going to see next? I'm not telling... or rather, I don't know myself yet, somehow my plot was totally derailed by the need to write some emotional stuff. Hm. We'll see lol...
And I love Joe, there needs to be more fic about him, yeah! I'm glad that you like him and his relationship with Chris in here! XD
Thank you very much again and <3<3<3 for all your amazing comments and for generally being awesome!!!

zjofierose December 2 2010, 21:41:52 UTC

yes. everything medea said. exactly. :)

amerasu1013 December 2 2010, 22:03:31 UTC

Thank you very much bb! XD
I'm so happy you liked it! *squeezes*

pomme_noir November 29 2010, 23:45:16 UTC

Goodness, I love it when your Chris gets all angry and dangerous. I'm so glad he's got Karl in his corner. I'm looking forward to seeing who you choose as the bad guy and the background on why. You've got a knack with crazy good plot spin offs. May the muse be with you.

amerasu1013 November 30 2010, 07:56:41 UTC

Oh, me too... he's all dark and dangerous and sexy lol! Thank you very much, I'm really glad you like it! And now I'm off to write more, since, wow, expectations! ;-P
(and I wonder where I put those droids I'm looking for...)
Thank you and <3<3<3!

mindor December 1 2010, 09:13:13 UTC

God, now I want a Star Wars AU with Chris being Luke and Zach as Han...

amerasu1013 December 1 2010, 11:31:47 UTC

*channels Obi Wan Kenobi*
You will write that Star Wars AU. You will sit down and write it. You want to write it. You will write it. And you will not forget the kinky hot dirty sex, possibly including use of the force and/or a lightsaber...

garfieldspet November 30 2010, 15:50:34 UTC

Sweet!! I love the different POV's. Hope Chris and Karl get plenty chances to kick butt...

amerasu1013 November 30 2010, 17:38:16 UTC

Thank you very much!!! Next parts are in beta, but we'll see about that butt kicking... ;-P
<3<3 thanks for reading and liking and commenting!

jachelle0627 November 30 2010, 21:38:06 UTC

Oh this is just perfect! It's my birthday and I took the day off from work and I'm reading mirror!pinto. It just doesn't get better than this. Joe in the hospital with his "baby brother" is just heart-breaking. I'm so glad he'll be there for him when he wakes up. Ahem, he better wake up, you know (yes, yes cliffhanger...I will have patience). Angry, possessed-by-revenge Chris is amazing and I'm glad Karl is by his side.

amerasu1013 November 30 2010, 21:57:39 UTC

OMG WHAT YOUR BIRTHDAY WHAT AAAAH!!!
OKAY WHAT TO DO GAH OH I KNOW: YOU SHALL GET THE NEXT 2 CHAPTERS AS A PRESENT THEY MIGHT BE A LITTLE LATE COZ THEY ARE STILL IN BETA BUT PRESENT WILL BE UP SOON!!! *loves you*
HAPPY BIRTHDAAAEEE BB!!!
(also, thank you!!!)

jachelle0627 November 30 2010, 22:28:44 UTC

OMG a mirror! fic present. So happy now. <3 BTW, I love your Santa Jake and Elwood icon - makes me smile every time I see it.

amerasu1013 November 30 2010, 23:00:46 UTC

BB FOR YOU THERE SHALL BE LOTS OF PRESENTS!!! <3<3<3 right back!!
And thanks!! I have no skillz at photoshop, but Paint seems to work, too lol!

mindor December 1 2010, 08:38:35 UTC

You've a horrible influence on me...
First you made me pick up a WIP, then you leave cliffhangers in said WIP causing my hair to gray rapidly (under the dye...) and last but not least, you get me turned on by Chris kicking the shit of a poor, unsuspecting criminal.
Also, I'm going to start collecting signatures to bring Alex back and probably to get her together with Joe, just giving you the heads up!

And you know, you're awesome as always! :)

P.S. WRITE THE THREESOME, YOU CAN DO ZAT!

amerasu1013 December 1 2010, 11:21:35 UTC

Hahaha!
I'm totally happy with my evil sneaky ways of luring you onto the dark side... ;-P
As for Joe: he has all his actors, he doesn't need a girlfriend... *smirk*
And thank you very much, bb!! *loves*
PS: I'M TRYING! There's some stuff that needs to happen first, but we're getting closer! XD