New Fic: The Splash Part 2/2

[amelie_n]

Title: The Splash
Fandom: DWP
Pairing: Andy/Miranda
Rating: R
Summary: Andy chose Miranda over Christian once, and she'd do it again.
Disclaimer: I do not own The Devil Wears Prada. I'm just playing with it a little.
Author's Notes: This is the Valentine's Exchange Fic for chainofclovers . I've put the prompt at the end, along with additional notes. Thank

Comments

[kdsusa3]

This was great, and I really enjoyed the style in which it was written. I loved it thanks for posting this little gem.

[amelie_n]

Oh my god! You are the fastest reader ever!

Also, thank you for commenting. I'm really glad you liked it. It was fun to write!

Amelie

[jintymac]

This was so entertaining and absolutely charming, I loved it :D

Miranda was hilarious with her spying on Andy and it was great how they got together ;-)

[amelie_n]

Thank you for your lovely comment! I'm glad you found it entertaining!

Amelie

[chainofclovers]

Thank you so much for the amazing story! I really love your writing, so I was super-excited to see that you wrote a story for me. (And don't worry about it being "late"--my story is taking forever to finish and I probably won't have it posted for a couple more days.)

I'd kind of forgotten about my answers on the questionnaire, so I was excited to see David Hockney and an Italian restaurant and a tattoo and everything else pop up.

I absolutely loved the line about Andy having trouble telling the difference between real things and fake things. It would be hilarious if the rainbow heart tattoo actually was real. Miranda would have to come up with various excuses "Oh, it just hasn't come off in the shower yet" or "The chemicals must be really harsh"...and finally Andy would know the truth.

I also really liked how Andy thinks she's okay just playing the field, and then she gets blindsided by Miranda's big old jealous, lustful crush. It's really adorable. Thanks again! I'm so happy with the story!

[amelie_n]

I'm so glad you liked it. I always worry about whether it will my interpretation of the prompt will be the way the person wanted it to be!

Hehe! I have a feeling Andy wouldn't mind too much if the tattoo was real. She'd have something she could tease Miranda relentlessly about!

Anyway, I'm really relieved that you liked it. It was a fun prompt.

Thank you for leaving such lovely feedback!

Amelie

[flitterbug18]

yay this was wicked!! the heart tattoo made me giggle...and it was kinda cute that it was the twins idea :). I like the fact you made christian decent, it was obvious he wasn't for Andy but he was a nice enough guy. I don't like ppl getting hurt so this worked really well with that for me.

i enjoyed it very much :)!! and the style it was written in was really good!! thanks bubs!! xx

[amelie_n]

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to make Christian decent, because I thought it was bad enough that the girl he liked was ditching him on Valentine's Day to be together with the one person he could never win against.

Thank you so much for leaving such a nice comment!

Amelie

[blue_eyed_devil]

This was an excellent story! For smut, your love scene was very sensual. Both the make out scene in the limo and at Miranda's townhouse were very well written and just plain hot! I really enjoy reading your stories. I hope to see more DWP stories from you. So glad she dumped Christian. :)

[amelie_n]

I'm glad you say that about the love scene, because I did want to give it a try but didn't want to go all the way with the smut. Maybe next time, we'll see.

I've got a few more DWP stories buzzing around in my head, although I take ages for me to actually write.

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment! Positive feedback always makes me want to sit right back down and write again!

Amelie