New Fic: First Choice Part 2/2

Nov 29, 2008 17:18


Title: First Choice
Fandom: DWP
Pairing: Andy/Miranda
Rating: I have no idea. I suck at ratings! There is swearing, and some mild reference to violence, and not very explicit sex. M, maybe?
Author's Notes: I have finally managed to complete my first DWP fic! I haven't written and completed anything in years, so I'm pretty pleased with myself! Feel ( Read more... )

first choice, fic, andy/miranda, dwp

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xenasgab November 29 2008, 18:38:52 UTC
I liked this immensely, I was all set up for a unhappy ending!!

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amelie_n November 29 2008, 19:11:25 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! As for unhappy endings, I don't really write them. I'm a happy endings kind of girl!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Amelie

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charlance November 29 2008, 18:52:56 UTC
You did a great job of tying in Miranda's past with her future. I especially liked how the whole story revolved around first and second choices.

I hope I can read more of your work in the future. I'd love to find out if you have anything else planned in the DWP community.

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amelie_n November 29 2008, 19:13:48 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad the flashbacks worked for you! I really appreciate you taking the time to comment!

As for having something else planned, I'm taking part in the Secret Santa exchange, so I'm working on a fic for that right now.

Thank you for commenting!

Amelie

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blue_eyed_devil November 29 2008, 18:59:45 UTC
Well what a wonderful story. I really felt for Miranda with her relationship with her sister. It was a great look at the lady who would become a fashion queen. I love that Miranda's girls thought Andy was their guest more than hers. It was cool how you rewrote the movie too. I really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing with us. I hope you think about writing more.

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amelie_n November 29 2008, 19:17:35 UTC
Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked the story.

Somehow, I can see the twins being the type of kids who would think that everyone else exists solely for their entertainment. My dog's like that. She thinks every visitor is just there for her!

Thank you for adding me, btw! As for writing more, I'm working on my Secret Santa submission right now!

I appreciate your comments!
Amelie

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jenc81 November 29 2008, 19:09:52 UTC
This was a wonderful story. I really liked seeing another side to Miranda. I hope you'll write another dwp fic soon.

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amelie_n November 29 2008, 19:19:08 UTC
Thank you for reading and for your lovely comment! I'm writing another fic right now for the Secret Santa exchange.

Thank you for taking the time to comment!

Amelie

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kdsusa3 November 29 2008, 19:30:17 UTC
I enjoyed this immensely. I liked the POV, and the way you wrote Miranda's practicality. Please write more of this genre soon.

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amelie_n November 29 2008, 23:09:02 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I'm really glad you liked the way I wrote Miranda, cause you can never really be sure with her...

I'll definitely be writing more soon. Thank you for taking the time to comment,!

Amelie

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