A Beautiful Mess, 22/22

Apr 18, 2011 23:31



Fic: A Beautiful Mess, 22/22
Summary: Luke is a pediatrician! He is officially Dr. Luke Snyder.
Spoilers: References to Luke's past from canon and that's about it.
Disclaimer: Wish they were mine but they're not.
Note: This was inspired by this entry in lure_prompts by the brill _alicesprings. Feedback, concrit, etc. welcome ( Read more... )

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hopperl April 19 2011, 18:13:58 UTC
I just LOVED everything about this fic! It was such great story telling. That ending was worth the wait. The fact that Luke has really transformed Reid, not into someone else so much, but into the real him. Luke allowed Reid to get rid of all the shell/protection that he had around him and just be his true, wonderful self. I also love that Luke is getting so much from Reid as well and has learned how to accept all that love and support. I can't believe it is over, but it was such a beautiful and perfect ending. *sigh*

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ganeshalemming April 19 2011, 18:19:26 UTC

What a wonderful story *sigh* Two misfits (as they saw themselves) who had never made it work with love, turned out to be so right for each other. You let their relationship grow slowly, organically, and you showed how it really made sense and came together. The Reid POV made me happy all the time, and there are so many gems of fun and subtle humor in your writing. And a final swim in the warm ocean under the stars? You spoil us. :) Thanks so much for writing and posting this!

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luvkradam April 19 2011, 19:08:22 UTC
That was a fantastic story.
One of my favs. xD
And I loved the ending. Perfect.
I hope you write more stories.
You're really talented.

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sleeper6 April 20 2011, 00:58:46 UTC
Wonderful fic all the way through!

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bluemagicrose April 20 2011, 02:00:01 UTC
This was such a beautiful story. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us.

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