A Beautiful Mess, 22/22

Apr 18, 2011 23:31



Fic: A Beautiful Mess, 22/22
Summary: Luke is a pediatrician! He is officially Dr. Luke Snyder.
Spoilers: References to Luke's past from canon and that's about it.
Disclaimer: Wish they were mine but they're not.
Note: This was inspired by this entry in lure_prompts by the brill _alicesprings. Feedback, concrit, etc. welcome ( Read more... )

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_alicesprings April 19 2011, 08:01:07 UTC
OMGOMGOMG!!! *flails*

FLAILING SO HARD, BB!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Love it sososososo much! Will be back with quotey feedback!

*flails*

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_alicesprings April 21 2011, 00:15:41 UTC
So many great lines jumped out at me, bb! Look out, excessive quoting on the way! :P

Reid has his arms pinned to the bed, long fingers holding Luke’s wrists tightly as he thrusts his cock in and out of Luke, deep and hard the way that he likes it.

“Reid!” Luke calls out, his voice starting to sound raw. It isn’t the first time it’s happened since they’ve been here. Luke’s been even more vocal than Reid thought possible. Hearing a turned on Luke Snyder only helps turn Reid on and has him seriously reconsidering their living arrangements at home. Living in an apartment gives him a tentative Luke. Living in a house, maybe out of the city a little will give him this uninhibited sex god on a regular basis.

NNNNNNGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

“And who are the hypothetical ‘they’?” Reid does loving his ego stroked as well as other parts of his body but these compliments from Luke leave him completely euphoric. He admits to himself, briefly, that he can equate them with the high he gets from an orgasm with Luke. He thinks admitting this ( ... )

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_alicesprings April 21 2011, 00:16:07 UTC
“I need you to keep fighting,” Reid lifts his head now, gazing at Luke so seriously Luke straightens up and pays attention. “I need you to take care of your kidney. I need you to not overwork yourself. I need you to stay you and not let anyone change you, not even me. I just need you, Luke.” There’s no better time to say these things. They’re in a place where all they’ve done is concentrate on each other and when they get back into the real world, he needs to make sure these things stay in Luke’s mind.

*swooooooooons*

“Don’t come crying to me if the hypothermia begins to set in!” Reid calls after him.

“It’s warm!” Luke calls back, dipping his head into the water, and quickly coming back out again. “Get out here!”

“Are you crazy?”

Luke’s splashing around in the ocean and all Reid can think about is a tide sweeping him away and Reid giving his account of the last time he saw Luke floating out into …

Okay.

Reid quickly removes his clothes and runs out to join him.

So whipped, lololol.

Reid bends his head down to drop a kiss to ( ... )

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scotianova April 19 2011, 08:12:16 UTC
... one of the most amazing stories, I'ver ever read on this board.A really beautiful piece of fiction! Thank you!

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suzvoy April 19 2011, 09:18:23 UTC
A wonderfully happy ending! Bravo!

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1xxbeccaxx April 19 2011, 11:21:17 UTC
Awww this was so lovely,the end was wonderful
I absolutely loved this whole story, Thank you.

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marsabi April 19 2011, 11:50:27 UTC
LOVED the whole story! These last chapters were no exception. I really enjoyed the way Luke supported Reid. The vacation time and talk of marriage was just great!

Thank you!

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