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amelialourdes

fic: A Beautiful Mess, 19/22

Mar 03, 2011 00:10

Fic: A Beautiful Mess, 19/22
Summary: Luke is a pediatrician! He is officially Dr. Luke Snyder.
Spoilers: References to Luke's past from canon and that's about it.
Disclaimer: Wish they were mine but they're not.
Note: This was inspired by this entry in lure_prompts by the brill _alicesprings. Feedback, concrit, etc. welcome! ♥

( Chapter 19. )

my fic

Comments 46

luvkradam March 3 2011, 09:04:30 UTC

This chapter had me crying my eyes out.
It was beautiful but sad.
Poor Matthew.
I have loved this story from the beginning
and it keeps getting better and better.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

amelialourdes March 4 2011, 06:52:01 UTC

Aw, apologies for the tears but thank you so much for reading and commenting!

_alicesprings March 3 2011, 09:05:07 UTC

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! :(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

OMG you're so mean.

The day after this intense conversation is Matt's surgery. Reid turns on his side and sees Luke's eyes already open, one hand resting on his chest, and the other arm at his side. Reid takes in a deep breath and tucks his hands underneath his pillow as he watches him ( ... )

amelialourdes March 4 2011, 06:52:20 UTC

I KNOW. I AM SO MEAN. :((

EEE. GLAD YOU ENJOYED, BB. <3

_alicesprings March 4 2011, 06:55:45 UTC

I DID NOT THINK YOU WOULD ACTUALLY KILL HIM. YOU MEANIEPIE. :(

I ENJOYED VERY MUCH, BB! WILL ENJOY REID CONSOLING LUKE GREATLY. OH YES. \O/

amelialourdes March 4 2011, 07:27:58 UTC

I KNOW. I DIDN'T THINK HE'D KICK THE BUCKET UNTIL HE WAS IN THERE. THEN, IT WAS TIME. :(

THERE WILL BE THAT AND WHO DOESN'T LIKE PROTECTIVE/COMFORTING!REID? I THINK WE'VE DETERMINED THAT WE LOVE HIM. \o/

smittle March 3 2011, 10:20:17 UTC

Oh no! This is heartbreaking! I'm glad that you've given them this crisis when the relationship is so strong though, because it gives me faith that they'll get through it together.

amelialourdes March 4 2011, 06:53:02 UTC

That is just them! They are Luke and Reid. Wild elephants cannot tear them apart or some other analogy. Thank you for reading!

marsabi March 3 2011, 12:27:12 UTC

Ah- no! I have to tell you, a little girl I know just passed away from cancer yesterday (she was 6) and I came here to escape my real grief over her. So I'm bawling right now.

Anyhow, good chapter, but so sad...Hope the next few are happy!

amelialourdes March 4 2011, 06:53:53 UTC

Oh, my gosh. I am so, so sorry to hear about the little girl! This probably wasn't the best thing to read after that news. Thank you for reading and it's Luke and Reid so you know it does end happily. :)

shadownyc March 3 2011, 12:52:26 UTC

This is so heartbreaking. I don't know who my heart goes out to more -- all of them.

Very powerful chapter!

amelialourdes March 4 2011, 06:54:09 UTC

All of them is a good call, I agree. Thank you so much!