fic: A Beautiful Mess, 11/22

Jan 04, 2011 01:05



Fic: A Beautiful Mess, 11/22
Summary: Luke is a pediatrician! He is officially Dr. Luke Snyder.
Spoilers: References to Luke's past from canon and that's about it.
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Wish they were mine but they're not.
Note: This was inspired by this entry in lure_prompts by the brill _alicesprings. Feedback, concrit, etc. welcome! ♥

Chapter 11. )

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teranee January 4 2011, 11:49:47 UTC
I love it, as usual. :D And OMG, the bit with the family eating breakfast and everyone knowing what was going on? PRICELESS! I would KILL to have seen that play out on the show! You are a godess! And yay for this fic being back again - it wasn't really gone that long, but I still missed it. :)

Ooo, and I haven't read your Noah Who fic yet, so I'm gonna do that today and (presumably) shower you with more praise later. :D

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amelialourdes January 11 2011, 05:07:43 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and your comments as always! I think that there are a million and one awkward moments that we could've witnessed on the show. At least there's fic! Hee.

Thank you for still reading and reading the other stories! I'm so behind on everything. :((

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marsabi January 4 2011, 13:37:45 UTC
Nice job! The first part was lovely and hot, and I liked how later the day had put that bounce in Reid's step- love a happy Reid!

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amelialourdes January 11 2011, 05:07:54 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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shar_jere January 4 2011, 14:53:10 UTC
OMGOMG.poor luke is so embarrass..children can be so innocent!!thank you!!

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amelialourdes January 11 2011, 05:08:08 UTC
Haha that is very true. Thanks for reading!

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hopperl January 4 2011, 14:59:42 UTC
Another fantastic chapter. I LOVE them working together!!!! Loved the kitchen scene w/ an embarassed Luke and an unphased/amused Reid.

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amelialourdes January 11 2011, 05:08:30 UTC
Thank you so much! They do make a really great time. :)

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joann414 January 4 2011, 15:56:52 UTC
So funny. Ried is such an ass. Luke suffering from embarassment, and Reid stuffing his face as if nothing happened. Loved how they go into the doctor mode together. Great read.

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amelialourdes January 11 2011, 05:16:16 UTC
Hee, thank you so much!

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