fic: no longing for the sun (the borgias)

[amelia_scars]

no longing for the sun. t for dark themes. 1,375 words.
He's pathetic, and he knows it. cesare/lucrezia. (set pre-series)

Comments

[amelia_scars]

She has a very special talent at that. Thank you. :)

[edspresso]

well written Cesare angst, and Lucrezia in your writing looks and sounds like an angel flittering about who holds Cesare in a spell. Great job!

[amelia_scars]

Well, she was an angel before Giovanni plucked out her wings. :(
Thank you. :)

[sierralovely]

I like the idea, of her being sunshine and him being shadow only together do they show the other beauty. I still can't help but to want her to long for him back. maybe one written from Lucrezia's point a view to even the score?

[amelia_scars]

Lucrezia's perspective of Cesare would be really difficult to pull off; although the originality of the idea is rather appealing. . . My muse has been humping my leg recently as well so I'll see what I can scrounge up. :)

Thanks for the comment. :)

[9luciddreams]

this was really lovely, especially the line "Lucrezia is the only person that looks upon Cesare in something that resembles such love, such respect." it really sums up how much Cesare needs Lucrezia's lightness and affection because it builds him up, it gives him what he needs in life. great story :)

[amelia_scars]

Why thank you. :) Cesare needs more love, bless him. His father uses him as a pawn, Juan is always going to consider him a rival and god-only-knows about Jofre's opinion of him. Lucrezia is probably the only one that cares about him, when I think about it.