HSM2 FIC: "Friends of Normal" (Chad/Ryan, Sharpay, other characters)

Nov 02, 2007 03:57

TITLE: Friends of Normal
FANDOM: High School Musical 2
AUTHOR: amelia_kay
CHARACTER(s): Sharpay, Chad/Ryan, the Evans, Kelsi, a little Gabriella.
SUMMARY: A series of vignettes, post-HSM2. Sharpay wants everything to go back to normal; Ryan never wants to see normal again.

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Please feel free to leave feedback here or there. :)

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amelia_kay November 3 2007, 06:47:41 UTC
Thank you! I tried to show that Ryan was more hurt at a perceived rejection than anything else, then the exchange in the diner was Chad's way of reassuring him, but it may not have come across the way I intended. Thanks for all your thoughtful feedback!

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raspsun November 2 2007, 23:42:24 UTC
Very nice! Extremely well-written, with a certain kind of style that was so great to read -- not overwrought, simple in a complicated kind of way. Hm, I'm afraid that made no sense. But the characterizations and dialogue were both lovely! Great job!

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amelia_kay November 3 2007, 06:49:56 UTC
No, it totally made sense. I see Ryan as a very unpretentious, uncomplicated character at heart, and since this was from his POV, I wanted to keep it very straightforward. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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brigid31 November 3 2007, 03:15:15 UTC
This is so adorable. I love the interplay and slow build of the relationship. And they both manage to sound like themselves.

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amelia_kay November 3 2007, 06:50:09 UTC
:D Awesome!

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mugglerock November 3 2007, 16:20:32 UTC
This was really well written. I also loved how intune you were with the characters. All of the dialogue echoed their voices perfectly. Well done you!

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amelia_kay November 11 2007, 18:02:44 UTC
Thank you!! I was especially worried about not making a caricature out of Sharpay (something I see a lot of in fic sometimes) so it's really great to hear this.

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theafterimages November 11 2007, 20:06:22 UTC
This was great! Especially Sharpay- you wrote her perfectly. I love that even her letter opener was sparkly, lol.

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