This was so happy. I squee'd and hid my face and giggled and scoffed and sang along and...hnnnnnnnng'd. Everything is Kurtofsky and nothing fricking hurts.
OMG I AGREE WITH TINA THAT WAS HOT! So, your Az? LOVED him! I sure hope he continues to be Dave's friend on the show...also, loved that you threw Merzimio in this! ;) Then Dave singing, and making Kurt all hot and bothered until he jumped the jock? HOT HOT HOT! But not as hot as the end! OMG that was a powerful BJ, and Dave talking dirty to Kurt making him get off all over his pants? MIND TWIN why do you do this to us then tell us you won't write more???? XD
I loved writing Azzy. I could have sooo much fun with him in the future. I kind of Mixed Puck's azzy in his fic, with the azzy in our rp. I think It meshed pretty well.
I loveeee Merzimio. SO. :-D
..... I WILL WRITE MORE. Just probably not in this storyline. :-)
i just read all three parts straight through. i'm not often a kurtofsky shipper (i'm a puckurt fan at heart), but when it's good, it's /GOOD/. and this was.
it was a brilliant take on the prompt, and it expanded into something fantastic. the sex was hot, the support was sweet, and the relationship was close to realistic (if kurt can forgive puck and finn he can forgive dave).
I was puckurt fan for a looooong time (As well as Puck/Finn.) so I know how you feel. I still am a huge fan of both those above ships.
I agree about Dave. I think he has a chance to change and be better, which is why I like the ship so much.
Would you believe this is the first time I've actually written sex scenes? Lol. There was one little SINN ditty, but that was it.
The moment I read that prompt I KNEW I have to do it. the story fell into my head right away. Then is just got bigger. I actually Thought about adding one more part, but that would be after I finish other works. :-) I know I said I was done, but I actually have a lot more I want to say.
Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it. <3
Read all three straight through and just wow. Great three shot, just freakin' fantastic. I loved Dave's confession and through the PA system...they should do that on the show! I'm glad he got the support of people he needed (I could see his dad being an ass even though they showed him being reasonable on the show). And of course he got Kurt! Those sex scenes..just like Tina said That Was Hot!! Love this, just freakin' love it!
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RACHEL YOU ARE JUST... DARLING.
Thank you. I'm so happy you liked it.
KURTOFSKY FOREVER BABE. ALWAYS. <3 RIDE THE KUUUUURVE.
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/ded.
ILY.
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Glad you liked. Now, we can RP to your heart's content.
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So, your Az? LOVED him! I sure hope he continues to be Dave's friend on the show...also, loved that you threw Merzimio in this! ;)
Then Dave singing, and making Kurt all hot and bothered until he jumped the jock? HOT HOT HOT!
But not as hot as the end! OMG that was a powerful BJ, and Dave talking dirty to Kurt making him get off all over his pants?
MIND TWIN why do you do this to us then tell us you won't write more???? XD
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I loved writing Azzy. I could have sooo much fun with him in the future. I kind of Mixed Puck's azzy in his fic, with the azzy in our rp. I think It meshed pretty well.
I loveeee Merzimio. SO. :-D
..... I WILL WRITE MORE. Just probably not in this storyline. :-)
LOVE YOU MT. <3
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I <3 you, MT!
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:-)
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i just read all three parts straight through. i'm not often a kurtofsky shipper (i'm a puckurt fan at heart), but when it's good, it's /GOOD/. and this was.
it was a brilliant take on the prompt, and it expanded into something fantastic. the sex was hot, the support was sweet, and the relationship was close to realistic (if kurt can forgive puck and finn he can forgive dave).
beautiful work.~
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I was puckurt fan for a looooong time (As well as Puck/Finn.) so I know how you feel. I still am a huge fan of both those above ships.
I agree about Dave. I think he has a chance to change and be better, which is why I like the ship so much.
Would you believe this is the first time I've actually written sex scenes? Lol. There was one little SINN ditty, but that was it.
The moment I read that prompt I KNEW I have to do it. the story fell into my head right away. Then is just got bigger. I actually Thought about adding one more part, but that would be after I finish other works. :-) I know I said I was done, but I actually have a lot more I want to say.
Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it. <3
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I love reviews like this. I'm so happy you enjoyed, this story is like my baby. It's the first serious attempt at writing in several years. :)
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