Fic: The Masseur (28/?)

[amberwinters]

Title: The Masseur (28/?)

Author:  Amberwinters

Pairing: Adam/Kris

Rating: R

Summary: AU fic where Kris Allen is a successful pop-star and Adam is an out of work actor that just got his massage license and a good job.

Wordcount: 3665

Notes:  I felt better by the second half of the story…sorry.

Warnings: Not too many, some cursing, some sexy times, some

Comments

[rosegust]

Kris, "drunk and jealous" when will this madness end. OMG so much going on in this chapter. Kris tempted by hot chicks, all of the hot chicks wanting the one guy that only wants Kris, and Nick, hot hot Nick with two hot chicks, and grinding his ass on Adam's crotch to give him a little comfort, after Kris so bolding goes where he hadn't before in plain view to be exploded upon with a slap on the face. Girl you are killing me here. Great chapter, looking forward to how they get past this.

[amberwinters]

I think your summation was better than the chapter LOL

[scorpio_15]

sigh...Just when I'd stopped pulling my hair out thinking everything would be okay. I think I'll be bald by the end of this story, lmao! I love it though, keep it coming!

[amberwinters]

Sorry, I had pent up energy after being sick and lazy for so long :)

[embaka]

These boys are making me crazy. They just need to do it already!!

[silencefound]

I'm gonna be honest, this story is getting redundant with Kris constantly being an asshole.

He's becoming unredeemable IMO and I'm not sure why Adam wants him so much. He's emotionally retarded and immature.

There is such a thing as overuse of angst ya know.

[chancesareslim]

Kind of like real life. What you wrote reminded me of an old boyfriend. Asshole, retarded and immature. LOL

[amberwinters]

I will concede I am prone to being overly angsty and actually was trying to move to closure. But then the angst took over and I had to write it. I do want to exercise self control and end it before chapter 35. My goal was 30 but that would mean I would have to do it in 6000 words and frankly I am just not that concise :)

[silva_ted8]

You delivered the platonic kiss! So will Nick now become Adam's friend with benefits? ;) Kradam keeps repeating their mistakes and aggravating each other. They're like two petty immature kids bickering in a playground. Kris lashes out when ashamed then gets jealous and mean when Adam acts out. Adam uses sex to relieve hurt and upsets Kris even more. Your Kradam is wild and outrageous, crazy in love and lust, full of volatile passion and combustible drama. Love your story and fast update as usual.

[amberwinters]

Stop it, that was an innocent kiss LOL.

[silva_ted8]

Platonic is innocent lol ;)! But then again, it could always lead to something more :)! Possible story line: Nick, Jason and Jake bring Kradam together. Nick tells Adam to stop using sex as an instant band aid for hurt while Jason and Jake organise a pep talk for Kris. Adam regrets fooling around with Nick and misses Kris terribly. A remorseful and sober Kris pines for Adam like a sad puppy. He writes a love song for Adam and embarrasses himself in public when he dedicates it to Raven Hair, the man he loves. If you want to extend this to 35 chapters (or more), you can keep alternating happy times with angsty turmoil. Either way, The Masseur offers a fun ride and guilty pleasure.