Comments | amber_tasya: two weeks

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two weeks

Mar 27, 2011 19:53

Title: Two Weeks
Author: Amber
Rating: R
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos, Cesc Fabregas/Iker Casillas
Disclaimer: Not mine at all. I just borrow and play.
Warning: It doesn't closely deal with disorders but there are mentions of suicide, self injury, and eating disorders. This part does get a little more graphic towards the end.
A/N: Not exactly ( Read more... )

player: xabi alonso, pairing: torres/ramos, player: iker casillas, pairing: casillas/fabregas, player: fernando torres, player: david silva, two weeks, player: sergio ramos

Comments 31

liroa15 March 28 2011, 00:35:29 UTC

awww. You just knew it was going to end badly for Fernando, but I'm glad they can sort of make a new start.

And Xabi, I so see you making a move on Silva. ;)

flvy March 28 2011, 14:03:06 UTC

He did I don't think the poor guy knew it was going to be quite so bad for him though.

Of course I mean in a year Silva only got cuter.

liroa15 March 28 2011, 14:22:52 UTC

lol. Yeah, but he was a bit naive, thinking Sergio would just let that pass.

lmao. Oh Xabi ...

flvy March 28 2011, 14:23:59 UTC

He really was. Or that because they got involved that it wouldn't really matter.

It's Silva you try not to be a dirty old man about it.

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heartt_breaker March 28 2011, 01:16:00 UTC

WHAT. OMG, I can't believe it's over! And I'm soooo waiting for the sequel.

flvy March 28 2011, 14:10:14 UTC

I know I know I'm not good at super long. Fernando and Sergio need to work on their shit there will be a sequel. Plus I have plans for Cesc and Iker. Then Silva should get laid poor kid.

shana0809 March 28 2011, 01:16:07 UTC

Awww boys. You make something inside of me hurt with all of this. But it really couldn't have gone different.

♥ for the end though

flvy March 28 2011, 14:10:54 UTC

Right they get to start over so it's okay. Of course none of their relationships are going to be easy...

shana0809 March 29 2011, 00:22:01 UTC

They never are....

dld_ftw March 28 2011, 01:34:17 UTC

Aiiieeee! I can't believe it's over. I look forward to the sequel. And also, can't wait to see what WIPs you're working on. :-)

flvy March 28 2011, 14:11:51 UTC

A Cesc/Iker stepbrother fic and then a Sergio/Cesc kid fic. Don't know what to finish off first though.

They'll be back though I like these boys and they're sharp edges.

notoriousjk March 28 2011, 01:41:56 UTC

oohhhhhh yes! This was fantastic!

I knew as soon as Sergio found the book, or when he found it, that things would go badly. There was just no way around it.

I'm glad it wasn't a cleanly wrapped up ending & that at least there was a little hope for them to become friends or acquaintances in the future.

I really enjoyed reading this whole series.

flvy March 28 2011, 14:14:41 UTC

There was a lot less violence then I thought there was going to be though.

I don't think there was any way to make the ending clean expect take them apart and put some time in the middle. Anything sooner would have been a bigger mess.