OMFG BB!!! Are you back for good now?? ;~; God I missed you! Okay, I LOVE this. It's really beautiful but also sad in the most wrenching ways. I wasn't thinking much about it when I read about the amusement park date but then towards the end I was like WHUTDAFUQ?! Why are they breaking up when they still love each other so much! ): Man this is so heartbreaking, I hate it when relationships end and feelings don't.
But on a side note, I'm glad that Jinki gave Kibum such a good time on their last date even though I'm still feeling sad over the breakup ;A; Hearing that bunch of things Kibum said when he was playing the punching bag machine is just so
yesh i'm back for real now :)) and I miss yah heaps too<33333 HAHA i knew that part would be surprising -and not in a particularly nice way- but i wanted it to end like that and i think it'd be the best to give an impression that the meaning of 'start' works in this situation too :D thanks a bunch bb<33 :-"
I was just going to read and go, yea, being a silent reader and all but then when I read the last part. Oh god I thought it was going to be a happy ending, why would they leave each other ;n; I got surprised ok, in a good way of course. But also, what made me /want/ to leave a comment is that, everything here just made me remember the way I /felt/ when I could still see the one I love, but he didn't know, or he chose to ignore me. But anyway, this is really sad and I felt the sting of tears while I was reading the last few lines. Yea, I love this one :-) Thank you for writing!
oh you were surprised in a good way, really?? this would normally disappoint anyone who read, but hey, i'm really glad it succeeded in bringing such memory to surface -sorry that it's an unhappy one :( though what i was trying to portray is that a relationship doesn't have to be ended in a miserable way and a new beginning can always be started even when you haven't lost anything. i appreciate that you decided to comment, thank you very much <3 :)
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Okay, I LOVE this. It's really beautiful but also sad in the most wrenching ways. I wasn't thinking much about it when I read about the amusement park date but then towards the end I was like WHUTDAFUQ?! Why are they breaking up when they still love each other so much! ): Man this is so heartbreaking, I hate it when relationships end and feelings don't.
But on a side note, I'm glad that Jinki gave Kibum such a good time on their last date even though I'm still feeling sad over the breakup ;A; Hearing that bunch of things Kibum said when he was playing the punching bag machine is just so
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HAHA i knew that part would be surprising -and not in a particularly nice way- but i wanted it to end like that and i think it'd be the best to give an impression that the meaning of 'start' works in this situation too :D
thanks a bunch bb<33 :-"
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its sad but im happy for them.
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though what i was trying to portray is that a relationship doesn't have to be ended in a miserable way and a new beginning can always be started even when you haven't lost anything.
i appreciate that you decided to comment, thank you very much <3 :)
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