Love Remnants (I Will Stay)

[amber_serkly]

Title: Love Remnants (I Will Stay)
Pairing: Onew/Key
Genre: Angst
Rating: R (implied violence and smut? lol nothing hardcore though -3-)
Warning: english is not my first language :)
Summary: Kibum was trying to protect their love. Jinki was keeping the reassurance for himself.
A/N: a sequel for Fading, Fear

Comments

[heavenlove]

this was somehow angst, but its still beautifully written!
i've enjoyed it! ^^ oh well, i was worried for key bby when i knew onew has started to abuse him, but then i was kinda worried for onew because i thought key was gonna leave him eventually. but he didnt. he hung on to the hope that onew still loves him. strong boy. ^^ oh well, i would have left long time ago if i were him. HAAH!
do write more fics! ^^

[amber_serkly]

thank you!♥ :)
haha I was worried too at first :D
'should I make him leave?? or will it be better if I make him stay??' lol that kind of amateur writer's crappy thoughts XD
as much as I love angst and despite Kibummie's misery, I hate a brokeupOnKey XDD so this is the fail result♥
I will, I will ^^

[lulu1342]

Love, love LOVE IT!!!!!!(*^◯^*)

[amber_serkly]

thanksthank you! :)

[emptycavern]

You write beautifully, my dear. Really beautifully :)

This was as heartbreaking as the first one but so good at the same time. I wished one of them would realise the seriousness of the problem and seek help, I don't want to see it breaking them apart individually ):

Still. Their love is so strong that it can still hold them together, despite everything.
Thank you for writing such a good piece <3

[amber_serkly]

aww, thank you♥♥♥ ;v;
hmm I guess both of them were too scared to do that, considering that they couldn't even communicate normally with each other :<
errr i don't know whom to be blamed >__<
anw, thank you so much for reading!♥ :D

[theia88]

omg i feel like jinki is having two different personalities which i hate. sometimes he's nice and sometimes he's scary beast.. God i don't get it why Kibum could still stay. i mean if it's me, i'll be just runaway lol. why my otp have to be like this? *sobs* i kinda think onew has some mentality disorder or something because of his fear of losing someone..that's not good... poor kibum :(

[amber_serkly]

every single thing that you mentioned is right :)
Jinki does have some kind of psychological problem; something like emotional burden because of the unnecessary worry :<
but of course, of course, Kibum would still stay, he loves Onewwww :3
lol sorry~ XD OnKey is my OTP too, but I dunno why I love to make them suffer :P
thank you for reading!♥ XD

[justcallme_lisa]

this is soooo sad T^T...
but i love it,, ^^

[amber_serkly]

thanks for reading! ^^