Commentary, hooray! Part II.

Apr 02, 2011 23:01

More commentary for The Wrath of The Whatever From High Atop The Thing. Now seems a good time to reiterate that Inception isn't mine, The West Wing isn't mine, and the title of the story (from a West Wing quote) is also not mine! NOW, ONWARD.

Yes, it's Part II of my commentary! If you were interested enough by Part I to actually click through to this post, I am both flattered and grateful. )

fic: arthur/eames, fic, fic: inception, fic commentary

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amazingly_me April 5 2011, 05:30:45 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and encourage anyone and everyone to steal it! I stole it myself, after all.

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bredalot April 3 2011, 17:09:42 UTC
HOW DID I MISS THIS THE FIRST TIME 'ROUND? It's amazing and I kind of love it. (I have this crazy fondness for AUs in this fandom, I think because they can be so much fun and so free of the darkness that is all of Inception. This is no exception.)

Also, I always love your commentary, particularly when you comment on lines that you love. Only rarely are they the ones that I would've picked out (except for the dialogue, because I pretty much love your dialogue without exception - Eames & Yusuf are probably my favorite here too), but that always makes me take a second look, and then there are MORE lines that I love.

I do kind of wish it didn't end right there - I'm now invested in the campaign, too, and I want to see how it pays off! - but everything up to that is awesome. ♥

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amazingly_me April 5 2011, 05:32:10 UTC
Oh my goodness, thank you so much! ♥

I too have a crazy fondness for AUs in this fandom-- I have written five of them now, I think? MADNESS. I'd never written a single one before Inception.

I adore when people pick out lines they love, in their own fics or other peoples', because it's just so nice and specific and fun to see which lines push whose buttons. So I'm glad you like that too, hooray! :D

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laria_gwyn April 4 2011, 02:09:21 UTC
Thank you for doing this! It was thoroughly entertaining and enjoyable! Just a few random things:

1) I love taco trucks! Esp the disreputable looking sorts. They have the best food. :)

2) I think your dialogue is insanely clever.

3) One of the things I love best about this fic is the way the relationships are portrayed. They're like one giant dysfunctional family. It's adorable and endearing.

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amazingly_me April 5 2011, 05:32:41 UTC
Yay, I'm glad it was entertaining! That is its purpose, after all.

And thank you so much for the compliments, oh my gosh. ♥

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jibrailis April 4 2011, 02:14:13 UTC
WHY ARE YOU SO CHARMING.

I love all the insights into your own writing (Arthur leading a robotic uprising! Love as a terrible inconvenience) and all the quirkiness of your fics and you. ♥

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amazingly_me April 5 2011, 05:34:12 UTC
...BUT WHY ARE YOU SO CHARMING?

I'm just saying. It goes both ways. Gosh this comment is so lovely, and your comments ALWAYS ARE, as is your writing, and your...you, and so thank you so much, BASICALLY.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

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darkunicorna April 4 2011, 04:52:14 UTC
Hii I kind of skimmed this because I'm short on time, but AGH I NEED TO REREAD THIS SO BADLY I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU ~~~

Anyway, FLORIDA IS VERY HUMID, IT IS TRUE. Luckily I am not a frizzy hair person, but I have lived in Florida long enough that my lips get ridiculously chapped when I travel north and it's not fun when I forget my chapstick. ):

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amazingly_me April 5 2011, 05:35:13 UTC
Aw, thank you for taking the time to read it even when you were rushing! So nice. :]

I just do not deal well with the weather in Florida. I'm a Pacific Northwest girl, so everything about it-- the heat, the humidity, the extremes of weather-- are so foreign to me, and I CANNOT COPE.

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