More commentary for The Wrath of The Whatever From High Atop The Thing. Now seems a good time to reiterate that Inception isn't mine, The West Wing isn't mine, and the title of the story (from a West Wing quote) is also not mine! NOW, ONWARD.
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Yes, it's Part II of my commentary! If you were interested enough by Part I to actually click through to this post, I am both flattered and grateful. )
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Also, I always love your commentary, particularly when you comment on lines that you love. Only rarely are they the ones that I would've picked out (except for the dialogue, because I pretty much love your dialogue without exception - Eames & Yusuf are probably my favorite here too), but that always makes me take a second look, and then there are MORE lines that I love.
I do kind of wish it didn't end right there - I'm now invested in the campaign, too, and I want to see how it pays off! - but everything up to that is awesome. ♥
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I too have a crazy fondness for AUs in this fandom-- I have written five of them now, I think? MADNESS. I'd never written a single one before Inception.
I adore when people pick out lines they love, in their own fics or other peoples', because it's just so nice and specific and fun to see which lines push whose buttons. So I'm glad you like that too, hooray! :D
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1) I love taco trucks! Esp the disreputable looking sorts. They have the best food. :)
2) I think your dialogue is insanely clever.
3) One of the things I love best about this fic is the way the relationships are portrayed. They're like one giant dysfunctional family. It's adorable and endearing.
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And thank you so much for the compliments, oh my gosh. ♥
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I love all the insights into your own writing (Arthur leading a robotic uprising! Love as a terrible inconvenience) and all the quirkiness of your fics and you. ♥
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I'm just saying. It goes both ways. Gosh this comment is so lovely, and your comments ALWAYS ARE, as is your writing, and your...you, and so thank you so much, BASICALLY.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥
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Anyway, FLORIDA IS VERY HUMID, IT IS TRUE. Luckily I am not a frizzy hair person, but I have lived in Florida long enough that my lips get ridiculously chapped when I travel north and it's not fun when I forget my chapstick. ):
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I just do not deal well with the weather in Florida. I'm a Pacific Northwest girl, so everything about it-- the heat, the humidity, the extremes of weather-- are so foreign to me, and I CANNOT COPE.
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