Prose- No Answer

Sep 11, 2008 16:45

New linebyline line, "but there was no answer". The idea actually occured to me BEFORE I got all depressed and overwhelmed today lol. But I think my own feelings probably enhance this ( Read more... )

writing:sample, linebyline, prose

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kairiheart14 September 11 2008, 21:34:55 UTC
it's good... but I'm not sure about what u could name it yet.

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amayasora2992 September 12 2008, 01:49:46 UTC
Thanks.

Yeah IDK either obviouisly... it'll come at some point

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twisted_clarity September 14 2008, 18:01:57 UTC
Hummm...a title. I'm thinking something simple, like Alone.

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17_ally_17 September 23 2008, 01:45:00 UTC
Hm... this is from forever ago, but I have to point out that the only thing that gets me about it is "nothingness". It just seems unfitting. Otherwise, the adjectives all fit, and it's very descriptive. i can totally picture it :)

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amayasora2992 September 23 2008, 01:47:41 UTC
Thanks for the input. Glad you liked it.

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17_ally_17 September 23 2008, 01:50:59 UTC
You're welcome!

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