Poem- Cloud Gazing

[amayasora2992]

Wow, I guess everyone is going on a mass posting spree today. 3 entries in a row...

This is the 5th of 6 chapbook poems I've written. This one is my least favorite... I actually kinda hate it, because I added a whole stanza when I turned it in to make it more clearly relate to my theme, solitude. (read: Mom made me add a new stanza because she

Comments

[sapphire_heaven]

The poem is very nice :) Was the last stanza the one you had to add?

[amayasora2992]

Thanks :) No, actually the first stanza was originally two lines and part of this version's second stanza. So I basically added the first stanza.

[murbot]

omg that's so AMAZING! you write sosososo well and so descriptive too like i have said before! i like it a LOT