Comments | amayasora2992: Poem- Blue Skies

amayasora2992

Poem- Blue Skies

Apr 05, 2009 17:38

So, I hadn't written anything in a while, and I was sad. I thought I was sad because I hadn't written anything in a while, but it's really the opposite. I hadn't written anything in a while because I was content, calm, together, maybe even happy ( Read more... )

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kairiheart14 April 6 2009, 00:27:37 UTC

hmmm... I'm not sure if someone you tell would understand this, to be honest. I mean, I get the poem, somewhat, but I don't know if your parents or whomever you tell would understand how you feel, about how you don't feel okay, but that your hiding it from them so they aren't concerned.
I too, understand how the soul is the most direct way of communicating, and that if they don't understand your poem, then they don't understand what your trying to get at with it because I too, love writing as much as you do.

amayasora2992 April 6 2009, 12:43:01 UTC

Yeah IDK I guess it's kinda hard for non-CFers to understand what it's like for me sometimes. I guess that's okay. I understand it; that's the most important thing. At least it's well-written (isn't it?)

kairiheart14 April 6 2009, 15:04:28 UTC

yes, it's well written, or at least, I think it is. ^_^

17_ally_17 April 6 2009, 01:36:56 UTC

I can't write unless I'm on the verge, or in some sort of emotional breakdown. It's weird, but I totally understand the emotional state thing.

amayasora2992 April 6 2009, 12:39:07 UTC

I wonder why that is...?

Did you get what I was trying to say in the poem??

17_ally_17 April 6 2009, 18:44:57 UTC

I think it's cause we feel emotion more then. Like, when we're happy, we don't know strong emotion, but when we're upset, we can see depressed/surprised/sad/happy, and everything else. It's weird.

I... was quickly going through these entries last night, so I never read it, but I will now.

17_ally_17 April 6 2009, 18:49:31 UTC

Okay, so, the way I took it, was COMPLETELY different from the way you took it. I fully understand your reasoning, but this is what I would say about it.

When I read the beginning I think of my outer being. I am a pretty yound lady, who's cheerful, youthful, and seem like I have everything anyone could ask for.

And then it gets deep into your soul. It goes down, and shows that what you're fighting on the inside can never be known, that we all have this layer of perfect happiness, when deep down there's just a bunch of junk rumbling around trying to tear it's way out.

Yeah. I'm bad at explaining myself.