And behind door number three. . . !

Feb 09, 2008 15:47


That would be chapter number seven!  Yup, you heard me, it's all done!  I'm so excited!  It's actually a lot longer than expected, but mostly because Quatre's house is too damn big!  Silly rich boy!  Anyway, thanks tons to Jess and Dentelle because half of this is all your fault.  Lol.  I will warn this is a rough version, because I haven't really ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fotbb, harry potter, gundam wing, crossover

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ruthielund February 10 2008, 02:02:23 UTC
I think this is my favorite chapter so far. I can't wait to see Harry interacting with all of the other pilots. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing.

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yanagi_wa February 10 2008, 06:01:05 UTC
A friend of mine reced this. And I'm really glad she did. I really like this. Great story. Can't wait for more.

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jess_eklom February 10 2008, 17:01:42 UTC
Great chappie!! I really liked the bedrooms, but after the other two, Quatre's and Trowa's seemed a little plain.

Anywho, I liked the added mention of the bells and the secret passages and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.

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dentelle_noir February 10 2008, 17:28:56 UTC
I noticed a few typos and such throughout, none of them really bothered me and they were easy to ignore. I really liked this chapter because of the detail of interactions between T, Q, and H. I liked what you decided for harry's room, and the rooms for the other guys was interesting to see. I'm glad that you didn't let the other-room description bog you down, either. Great work.

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femaleshinigami February 22 2008, 09:13:14 UTC
EDIT: Just note, this was supposed to be the comment to part 6, I haven't read part 7 yet XD Just so you know :P *goes to read ( ... )

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