*blank stare*

[amaya_natsuya]

Okay, so I should probably give this to Dentelle_Noir to look at first, but I'm so sick of staring at it you don't even understand.  It's been sitting on my computer, done, for nearly a week and I've been going, "Duuuuh. . . Now what?"

Not to say I haven't written more, but even so, I'm still tired of staring at chapter five of Flight of the

Comments

[jess_eklom]

I liked this chapter very much, but I think things would be that much better if Tro shows up in his preventers uniform when he's leaving with Harry. That should shut Vernon up!!

[amaya_natsuya]

Oh, don't worry. Dentelle_Noir and I have the whole thing worked out. *Evil smirk*

[dentelle_noir]

I know you SAY that you think it's lacking because of the transitional elements, but I don't see that at ALL. There's quite a bit of movement in this chapter! Great work! I'm loving it, still! And no worries about me seeing it or not. If you prefer, we can do this more of a 'i give you feedback' instead of a beta markup sort of thing. We'll work out a good way that works for both of us.

[amaya_natsuya]

That's probably good. Then I don't have to worry about feeling guilty for posting before you read it over, and you have less work to do! Now. . . all we have to do is be online at the same time. Lol.

Thanks for the compliment, though. *Stokes ego and preens*