Whew!

[amaya_natsuya]

I finally finished chapter sixteen (which, all things considered, didn't actually take me too long).  I'm pretty happy for that.  I'm excited for the next chapter too (Sorry, I haven't written it yet, though.)

Anyway, I think I'll go ahead and post this before you try to kill me for rambling too much.

Title:  Flight of the Bumblebee Part Sixteen

Comments

[jess_eklom]

I liked this... the grandpa part just made me go "AWW!!"

There were a few misspelling here and there, but nothing TOO major... but I'm concerned about the G-boys going up against ol' moldy voldy.

UPDATE SOON!!

*pets Harry*

[taku_aiden]

-loves on it- I'm glad you updated, even if I have to be up in five hours for play practise. Damn over bearing director!! >=O The Grandpa Howard thing is way cute, sister Hilde makes me happy, and I couldn't stop giggling when Harry told Lance that Heavyarms loved Sandrock. That just killed me! And now I want it to be a HarryAli fic even if it's only hints. Make it one if you do a sequal though! HD is so over used, though if it is a true HD where Harry is "seme" then I wouldn't mind it to much.

Taku

[yanagi_wa]

Howard as a grandpa! *snerk* Great. I'm glad the guys decided to take the threat seriously. Voldimort vs. G-boys!

Great chapter.

[anonymous]

I love Grandpa, that was adorable. Ali comes over next time, I wonder if the G-boys realize they probably won't see Ali's dad again... Heavyarms waiting for Sandrock was perfect, I wish one of the G-boys had seen it. Can't wait till the next chapter, awesome writing.

[daenin]

I just caught up on Flight of the Bumblebee. What a wonderful way to give Harry protectors and people who care. You've also introduced me to a whole new fandom. Thank you!