"Cornflower," Daniel said softly, rising on his elbow in the soft mattress, his eyes taking in the naked beauty before him. "Mostly, anyway. Sometimes Robin's Egg
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Hee! Awesome. Sam and Daniel are all thinky about such a stupid question, and Jack's already figured it all out and you're mocking fanfic authors left, right, and centre.
Legs and fingers and tongues. Tangling, probing, tasting. All thought leaves Sam's mind as she loses herself in Daniel's touch. She doesn't think she'll ever get tired of this
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I'm so glad you liked it! I've never done a comment!fic before, so it was an interesting challenge. The ficlet could use some work, but hey, for my first try, maybe it's not terrible. :)
Re: Because I had to do two for you...thraesjaMay 7 2009, 14:12:25 UTC
Hee! Teal'c glee. Nicely done. I can totally picture this conversation, inviting eyebrow and all, even if I can't grasp why Sam would love rutabagas. :)
Re: Because I had to do two for you...amaranthtracesMay 8 2009, 12:50:19 UTC
Glad you liked. Sorry it took a couple days to put together. Had to find the time to go through Goa'uld-English dictionaries to find words that'd fit (seeing as how I'm not quite fluent yet). Ended up only having to invent one word! Also, rutabagas are extremely tasty, freak. ;)
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I hope your wild monkey sex is more cooperative than mine was. Er, not that I...er, you know what I mean.
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Excellent.
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I know it wasn't 100% with the prompt, but you and I have already discussed my...unusual approach to writing prompts. So... Enh.
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